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[title] => Hate
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[bodytext] => Hate is the way I feel. I have so much bottled up inside and so much that I've suppressed throughout the years. I can't explain any of my feelings or what I want. Everything inside is killing me. I just wish I could cry to let some of this out, but I can't...All I can do is bleed, bleed from my wrists, bleed a river so red. The razor, so sharp, cuts through like nothing else. This shiny blade that cuts so deep is all I know of love, all I know of compassion, it is my only friend. It will never let my down and I will forever love it for it is all I know of love.
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Hate
Contributed by
LayDownPlayDead
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Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 05:30:00 PM in AEST
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Hate is the way I feel. I have so much bottled up inside and so much that I've suppressed throughout the years. I can't explain any of my feelings or what I want. Everything inside is killing me. I just wish I could cry to let some of this out, but I can't...All I can do is bleed, bleed from my wrists, bleed a river so red. The razor, so sharp, cuts through like nothing else. This shiny blade that cuts so deep is all I know of love, all I know of compassion, it is my only friend. It will never let my down and I will forever love it for it is all I know of love.
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Re: Hate
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by OreO on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 06:56:57 PM AEST
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i have struggled with this so many times..it is a very dark dead place to be and the feeling inside that it brings is so cold and when it feels like nobody cares about you or what your doing or how you feel and the only thing that gives you feeling is your razorblade...it's a warm feeling..as though it takes your breath and captures your soul with it and lifts it up as you watch your blood dripping...watching the pain drip away from your warm flesh.....i do know what this place is like all to well...one im struggling with right now so very badly because sometimes it's sad but true...the only thing that sometimes seems to feel like loves me is my razorblade too....my heart goes out to you.....i won't tell you not to cut coz that does no good....but i will say you are loved in this world...just beleive in you....and search your heart..you'll find the answers you need...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: Hate
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 06:51:33 PM AEST
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| Marc again. Are you a self-injurer? Your poem is very sad, and describes something that no one should be forced to feel. I hope that this is a thing of the past for you, but doubtful that it is... |
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Re: Hate
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 06:53:05 PM AEST
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| Marc: I don't think that this reply was at all appropriate. It is very trigging in its content and maybe its writer should consider that before writing with such detail. |
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Re: Hate
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by PerfectlyDead666 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:33:53 PM AEST
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| nice but cutting isn't that great of an action |
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