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Array ( [sid] => 78440 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled Without Another Title [time] => 2005-01-04 15:07:38 [hometext] => just talked to my x for the first time in a while... plz comment [bodytext] => what makes you wonder
what it is like to live
a life where we both go wrong
and never choose to give

you said you loved me once
you knew you lied to me
if it ever mattered to a person
why couldnt you just see

that the lies were painful
that our time was wasted
we should turn our past
and just both face it

we did things we wished
we did not ever do
you did things to me
and i just hated you

we watched tv on those nights
we sat alone when it was late
you fell asleep on me
but the comfort was fake

people stare at eachother
people lied to us
i hate to say i loved you
even if i must [comments] => 1 [counter] => 522 [topic] => 48 [informant] => abnormalpunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Untitled Without Another Title

Contributed by abnormalpunk on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:07:38 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

what makes you wonder
what it is like to live
a life where we both go wrong
and never choose to give

you said you loved me once
you knew you lied to me
if it ever mattered to a person
why couldnt you just see

that the lies were painful
that our time was wasted
we should turn our past
and just both face it

we did things we wished
we did not ever do
you did things to me
and i just hated you

we watched tv on those nights
we sat alone when it was late
you fell asleep on me
but the comfort was fake

people stare at eachother
people lied to us
i hate to say i loved you
even if i must

Copyright © abnormalpunk ... [ 2005-01-04 15:07:38]
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Re: Untitled Without Another Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 01:20:01 PM AEST
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so sad...i feel your pain through your words...you expressed this very well...people survive off of lieing...some even die because of it...we all have lied...but only certain things should be protected with such untruthful words...

please comment on my work too
summer

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