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Array ( [sid] => 78437 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleeding Tears [time] => 2005-01-04 15:00:29 [hometext] => this could be in many differant topics because it is about a girl that tried to kill herself but her loved one came and found her in the proccess. He is trying to get her to hold on. [bodytext] => You're yelling at me
I know 'cause I can see your flushed face and your mouth moving fast
But I can't hear you.
I can't tell what you are saying.
You are crying.
My blood is splattered on your face
Mixing with your tears
Causing it to seem like you are crying blood
Black is starting to invade my vision
Swallowing your image
Why did I do this?
I want you. I don't want to leave you anymore.
I try to tell you I really do
But I can't move
I am lost inside my own body.
I hear one thing you say before everything is black
"Hold On."
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Bleeding Tears

Contributed by desolantdreamer on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:00:29 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

You're yelling at me
I know 'cause I can see your flushed face and your mouth moving fast
But I can't hear you.
I can't tell what you are saying.
You are crying.
My blood is splattered on your face
Mixing with your tears
Causing it to seem like you are crying blood
Black is starting to invade my vision
Swallowing your image
Why did I do this?
I want you. I don't want to leave you anymore.
I try to tell you I really do
But I can't move
I am lost inside my own body.
I hear one thing you say before everything is black
"Hold On."

Copyright © desolantdreamer ... [ 2005-01-04 15:00:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bleeding Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:45:54 PM AEST
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I really liked this but i dont think it needed the intro beside that great write and it was touching

Re: Bleeding Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:41:14 PM AEST
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I love this so much. It is like bitter sweet. It could help show suicidle people that there is someone out there that cares so much about them and would be so torn apart if they did it. and that they might regret thier decition. I love it so much...made me think. Thanks

Re: Bleeding Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:25:03 PM AEST
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this is a very sad poem but it is true all you need to do is hold on no matter what happens just hold on.

I like the flow it was short and to the point writing very well. good job

please post again

wolfman

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