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Array ( [sid] => 78431 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lonely [time] => 2005-01-04 13:32:21 [hometext] => This Is How I Feel Right Now... How I See Things That Happen To Me... Not Very Good, But It Only Took 5 min To Make [bodytext] => I walked down the street
Saw people looking at me
Realizing I didn't care
Acted like no one was there

I couldn't trust those people
Cause I can't even trust my friends
Wanting to die right there
I was walking there

My best friend betrayed me
My other friends didn't care
Whenever I talked to them
They acted like I wasn't there

Thinking about the times
I was happy don't work
Cause happy memories don't exist
In my life everyhing's black

Without looking were I walked
I walked to your home
When I see you looking at me
I know I have to die soon

Cause if I don't die fast enough
You'll keep looking at me
And i know what will happen than
You'll say please forgive me

I can't forgive you anymore
I've done that many times
It's stupid i didn't know
How all that would end

Walking on this lonely street
No one really here
Everyone looking at me
And I, I don't care

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Lostinside [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Lonely

Contributed by Lostinside on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 01:32:21 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I walked down the street
Saw people looking at me
Realizing I didn't care
Acted like no one was there

I couldn't trust those people
Cause I can't even trust my friends
Wanting to die right there
I was walking there

My best friend betrayed me
My other friends didn't care
Whenever I talked to them
They acted like I wasn't there

Thinking about the times
I was happy don't work
Cause happy memories don't exist
In my life everyhing's black

Without looking were I walked
I walked to your home
When I see you looking at me
I know I have to die soon

Cause if I don't die fast enough
You'll keep looking at me
And i know what will happen than
You'll say please forgive me

I can't forgive you anymore
I've done that many times
It's stupid i didn't know
How all that would end

Walking on this lonely street
No one really here
Everyone looking at me
And I, I don't care

Copyright © Lostinside ... [ 2005-01-04 13:32:21]
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Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:08:02 PM AEST
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don't look at life like that for every dark cloud there is a silver lining, look beyond that and then you'll see.
i too used to be like you, but i started to believe in myself and i've come a long way.
move on look past your present boundaries a new friend will come your way.
sad poem, but i did enjoy reading it.
chin up and smile for every smile sheds a worry...
keep smilin' luv, sue

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