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Array ( [sid] => 78391 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The evil within [time] => 2005-01-04 06:19:57 [hometext] => I tried at this one tell me what yall think [bodytext] => Its so cold, The fire is gone
The wind is blowing, You look warm
You took it all from me
I'll get it back
I'll take it all from you
You pull me down
You hold me down
You forced me
You made me cry
You gave me pain
I will give it all back
But only when you sleep
Tie you down
Make you scream, make you bleed
Laugh when I see you cry
Smile when I see your blood
The look in your eyes when you seen me slashing
Its froze in my mind
The taste of your blood warms me
You released the evil within [comments] => 4 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Stonedraider23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

The evil within

Contributed by Stonedraider23 on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:19:57 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Its so cold, The fire is gone
The wind is blowing, You look warm
You took it all from me
I'll get it back
I'll take it all from you
You pull me down
You hold me down
You forced me
You made me cry
You gave me pain
I will give it all back
But only when you sleep
Tie you down
Make you scream, make you bleed
Laugh when I see you cry
Smile when I see your blood
The look in your eyes when you seen me slashing
Its froze in my mind
The taste of your blood warms me
You released the evil within

Copyright © Stonedraider23 ... [ 2005-01-04 06:19:57]
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Re: The evil within (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:22:19 AM AEST
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powerful and hard hitting, a good expression on your inner struggles
pixie xx

Re: The evil within (User Rating: 1 )
by krazykat05 on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:51:00 AM AEST
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Hi, this poem has a lot going on with it. I read it about five tiimes and each time grasped a different conclusion to it's meaning- a point I find amazing in poetry. Anyway I think it's really poweverful and gives the reader an insight into the depth of the characters. well done!

Re: The evil within (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:17:45 AM AEST
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Scarey poem. You're not a mean person, are you?

Re: The evil within (User Rating: 1 )
by Riot_Girl on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 12:45:19 PM AEST
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awesome poem man, keep it up!
-Riot Girl

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