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Array ( [sid] => 78327 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hatred [time] => 2005-01-03 19:23:22 [hometext] => i wrote this when me and my freind who is black were walkin home from a party and some racist guy started following us sayin a whole bunch of racial slurs. [bodytext] => This world has been built on this ridicolous hatred....
Judenrein,racism,and slavery,such shallow views...
a tear goes out to everyone lost in this world wide war of terror...
we have a very shallow margin of error....
i fight back tears as i begin to reminisce...
childhood friends lost for the 'cause'...
and the 'cause' now seems almost endless....

sometimes i feel that i cant blame others for their hatred...
its been built on for centuries...
where shallow minds have been catered....
presidents and dictators...
this distaste in my soul....
is what slowly evaporates all hope for a world of peace...
racism is so strong...if you look close...
you see the venom oozing out their teeth....

whats sad is...
you cant be you without being offered insults...
the pain in my heart,spreads so deeply
i feel a revolt...coming without results
so sick of struggling for love that comes unconditionally...
i do have my mother though...
really the only one that showed there love so visibly...
the majority of the rest are unknown or friends/foes....
who prey on your every movement....
waitin for their envy to enclose...
perfectly...
as ill struggle mercilessly...
to fight off the scent of hatred,
(i could never completely wash it off)
and witness those persuaded...
to the pitch black flames of satan...
where hope slowly evaporates within the hands of time...
so i could never hate those...
whose stance on crime...
is the only way theyve learned how to succeed...
i constantly need another moment to breathe....
cuz theirs so many that hate me and want my ending to proceed.

i always feel i could never blame this world built on hatred
where jealosy's so real
that you can literally taste it...
and so many attempt to persuade you...
to have hatred just like them...
i fight back constantly with a heart of limited love...
it must be limited,i have no choice...
cuz theyll finish me if i open my heart endlessly...
searching for love....among the ice cold terrain...
where every attempt to find her strains my soul...
whats been erased is my complete control...
i cant help it,but close myself
cuz so many are selfish,jealous,overzealous
with watching your blood spill
while those that REALLY loved you...
sit back and feel so helpless....

Erik Bützin
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Hatred

Contributed by Rhino33 on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:23:22 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



This world has been built on this ridicolous hatred....
Judenrein,racism,and slavery,such shallow views...
a tear goes out to everyone lost in this world wide war of terror...
we have a very shallow margin of error....
i fight back tears as i begin to reminisce...
childhood friends lost for the 'cause'...
and the 'cause' now seems almost endless....

sometimes i feel that i cant blame others for their hatred...
its been built on for centuries...
where shallow minds have been catered....
presidents and dictators...
this distaste in my soul....
is what slowly evaporates all hope for a world of peace...
racism is so strong...if you look close...
you see the venom oozing out their teeth....

whats sad is...
you cant be you without being offered insults...
the pain in my heart,spreads so deeply
i feel a revolt...coming without results
so sick of struggling for love that comes unconditionally...
i do have my mother though...
really the only one that showed there love so visibly...
the majority of the rest are unknown or friends/foes....
who prey on your every movement....
waitin for their envy to enclose...
perfectly...
as ill struggle mercilessly...
to fight off the scent of hatred,
(i could never completely wash it off)
and witness those persuaded...
to the pitch black flames of satan...
where hope slowly evaporates within the hands of time...
so i could never hate those...
whose stance on crime...
is the only way theyve learned how to succeed...
i constantly need another moment to breathe....
cuz theirs so many that hate me and want my ending to proceed.

i always feel i could never blame this world built on hatred
where jealosy's so real
that you can literally taste it...
and so many attempt to persuade you...
to have hatred just like them...
i fight back constantly with a heart of limited love...
it must be limited,i have no choice...
cuz theyll finish me if i open my heart endlessly...
searching for love....among the ice cold terrain...
where every attempt to find her strains my soul...
whats been erased is my complete control...
i cant help it,but close myself
cuz so many are selfish,jealous,overzealous
with watching your blood spill
while those that REALLY loved you...
sit back and feel so helpless....

Erik Bützin




Copyright © Rhino33 ... [ 2005-01-03 19:23:22]
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Re: Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:38:58 PM AEST
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This is such a sad problem this world faces day in and day out. Why hate someone for their colour or faith ... hate them for the personality if it's called for. Profound write you've penned here. Now, if only the world would realise the truth ... we all bleed red.

peace
TS


Re: Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by LevyMetal on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:53:20 PM AEST
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great job. It is sad how no matter what, everyone will find something to tear you down about.




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