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Never in my life could I see
A joyous day and live happily.

Never will my sun shine
On those cloudy says of mine
Brighter days are just so hard to find.

I lye here alone
Waiting for my darkest days to be gone
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Never

Contributed by Artemis03 on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:24:35 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Happy, never not me
Never in my life could I see
A joyous day and live happily.

Never will my sun shine
On those cloudy says of mine
Brighter days are just so hard to find.

I lye here alone
Waiting for my darkest days to be gone
As I ask myself, "What did I do wrong?"

Copyright © Artemis03 ... [ 2005-01-03 10:24:35]
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Re: Never (User Rating: 1 )
by Nezenic on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:34:22 AM AEST
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I relate to this very well. Everyday, sadness always overcomes happiness. Friends always say it will get better, and I always tell myself, "how can it get much worse? is this rock bottom? if I truly am at the bottom, then i would have to go up, wouldn't I?" I hope this helps, I know it's not the most positive thing in the world, but then again, neither am I. it is a little bit of logic that I hope will come true in the future.

Re: Never (User Rating: 1 )
by blueeyedevil13 on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:05:01 AM AEST
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i always ask myself what i did wrong. this is hitting the nail on the head for me. i really like it.
im in 8th grade ^-^
keep writing
av

Re: Never (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:11:55 AM AEST
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im in 8th grade too, ive felt that way before, good write

Re: Never (User Rating: 1 )
by karmen on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:38:15 AM AEST
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its a good poem.. i can relate... i think a lot of kids our age feel like that at one point or another or maybe all the time....

Re: Never (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:27:53 PM AEST
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great poem.. I can relate to this .. I always felt this way when i was back in highschool myself.. I enjoyed reading this

Peace and hope
JENNI

Re: Never (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 12:55:13 AM AEST
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Grade 8 is hard... life is hard. Let me say
from someone whose experienced a bit of
both. I always say this and I think its true you
have to believe in and love yourself people's
opinions don't matter since their will ALWAYS
be people who won't like for one reason or
another. Stay true to yourself and keep on
writing like this. Remember... love yourself.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Never (User Rating: 1 )
by Unheard_Mute on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:20:00 PM AEST
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life's never easy on any of us... find something that'll make you happy and try and hang on

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