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staring straight at the sun
You are the burn in my heart
lying to me, saying that you care
You are the cut on my arm
bleeding, never to be dried and done
You are the lump in my throat
I'll swallow only if I dare
You are the void in my chest
aiming to cut and scar
You are the ache in my head
manipulating my heart
You are the itch to be scratched
wishing me to run away long and far
You are the drug of my life
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You are...

Contributed by Nezenic on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:17:24 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You are the pain in my eyes
staring straight at the sun
You are the burn in my heart
lying to me, saying that you care
You are the cut on my arm
bleeding, never to be dried and done
You are the lump in my throat
I'll swallow only if I dare
You are the void in my chest
aiming to cut and scar
You are the ache in my head
manipulating my heart
You are the itch to be scratched
wishing me to run away long and far
You are the drug of my life
causing me to fall apart

Copyright © Nezenic ... [ 2005-01-03 10:17:24]
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Re: You are... (User Rating: 1 )
by blueeyedevil13 on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:07:01 AM AEST
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*falls over* this is really good. i can relate so much its scary. this is outstanding. great job. keep writing DEFINATLY
av

Re: You are... (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:09:27 AM AEST
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Ouch. The addiction of love. What a timeless and painful struggle. Is there any drug more powerful? I doubt it. Unfortunately the worst thing is to give up. There is abundant life beyond it though. You have expressed it with expertise.
Stitch

Re: You are... (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:14:20 AM AEST
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wow... great poem!!

Re: You are... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:28:17 PM AEST
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another excellent show of talent. interesting how just one person can have so much impact on another.

Re: You are... (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 12:49:50 AM AEST
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I'm not sure if your talking about an actual
drug or something else, but this was a good
poem nonetheless. I enjoyed it honest and to the point no sugarcoating will be found here.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: You are... (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:45:26 PM AEST
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glad you kicked this addiction.
welcome to a new life in Christ.
--Em

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