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Array ( [sid] => 7825 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My So Called Goddess [time] => 2002-12-02 10:00:00 [hometext] => about this chick that i loved then hated at the time but dont anytmore. bout the same chick as the others believe it or not. haha. [bodytext] => My so-called goddess
What is she? A piece of glass?
I treat her as if she was fragile,
But she treats me as if I was the last.

She acts as if she’s all knowing,
She thinks she rules over everything.
But all 8 I now see in this beautiful creature,
Is a being in denial that can’t sing.

My so-called goddess,
Is nothing but a fake.
Once a little girl I knew,
For damn hell’s sake!

I stare at her reflections,
Her smile is in my mind,
Her laugh was always there,
And her eyes always shinned.

So what about my so called goddess,
That left me to my death,
Finally saying what she was meant to say,
Wouldn’t allow me to take my last breath.

Cause she is my so called goddess,
And I wish to kill,
Delete her from my life,
But still.

I was crushed by hate,
Denied by her heart,
She never cared,
And we lived so far apart.

Puh, my so-called goddess.
Things have changed.
You’re no longer my goddess,
Nothing shall be arranged.

I want you to go away,
And I will leave you alone,
I wish things could go back to the way they were.
Before we kissed, and your love was finally shown.
I wish I never met you,
I can’t change that,
No one can.
But lets go back to the past, and recheck that.

Since you’re my so-called goddess,
I’m going to give you a break.
I’m going to let you live through my misery,
And agony, and realize our love was ‘fake.’

I hate you.
I hate you.
I hate you my so-called goddess,
I hate you.
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My So Called Goddess

Contributed by frickinflamer on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



My so-called goddess
What is she? A piece of glass?
I treat her as if she was fragile,
But she treats me as if I was the last.

She acts as if she’s all knowing,
She thinks she rules over everything.
But all 8 I now see in this beautiful creature,
Is a being in denial that can’t sing.

My so-called goddess,
Is nothing but a fake.
Once a little girl I knew,
For damn hell’s sake!

I stare at her reflections,
Her smile is in my mind,
Her laugh was always there,
And her eyes always shinned.

So what about my so called goddess,
That left me to my death,
Finally saying what she was meant to say,
Wouldn’t allow me to take my last breath.

Cause she is my so called goddess,
And I wish to kill,
Delete her from my life,
But still.

I was crushed by hate,
Denied by her heart,
She never cared,
And we lived so far apart.

Puh, my so-called goddess.
Things have changed.
You’re no longer my goddess,
Nothing shall be arranged.

I want you to go away,
And I will leave you alone,
I wish things could go back to the way they were.
Before we kissed, and your love was finally shown.
I wish I never met you,
I can’t change that,
No one can.
But lets go back to the past, and recheck that.

Since you’re my so-called goddess,
I’m going to give you a break.
I’m going to let you live through my misery,
And agony, and realize our love was ‘fake.’

I hate you.
I hate you.
I hate you my so-called goddess,
I hate you.




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Re: My So Called Goddess (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 12:57:03 PM AEST
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hehe sides the fact that you have issues... sorry for everything i put you through!
nice poem i guess. heh-heh. nice rymes! deep with hate and passion.
hug a moose!


Re: My So Called Goddess (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:46:29 PM AEST
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I liked it and I don't think you have issues! keep writing!
Always
Amy


Re: My So Called Goddess (User Rating: 1 )
by DistortedSuicide on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:21:59 PM AEST
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Beautifully written...bye love




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