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I don't want you to look at me
When all I can do is cry
And pain and hurt is all you see
When all the tears are streaming down
And I just want to run and hide
But all I can do is stand my ground
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I Don't Want to See That Look

Contributed by LilGnefkow on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:08:31 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I don't wanna see the look in your eyes
I don't want you to look at me
When all I can do is cry
And pain and hurt is all you see
When all the tears are streaming down
And I just want to run and hide
But all I can do is stand my ground
'Cause I've done my best, I've tried

Copyright © LilGnefkow ... [ 2005-01-02 23:08:31]
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Re: I Don't Want to See That Look (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:10:28 PM AEST
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Awesome write! Emotional and it has a nice flow.
Great job!

Re: I Don't Want to See That Look (User Rating: 1 )
by jonbalser on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:11:52 PM AEST
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in most ways i know the feeling, it sucks when all you can do is stand there and not say a word

Re: I Don't Want to See That Look (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:23:46 AM AEST
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great expression in this.. I have been there before .. great job

peace and hope
JENNI

Re: I Don't Want to See That Look (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 12:06:09 PM AEST
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love the way uve put it...ive been ther...cudnt have said it better myself...

Umang.

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