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Array ( [sid] => 78225 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Feeling [time] => 2005-01-02 22:42:25 [hometext] => it sucks. so what? [bodytext] => It is so hard
explaining a feeling
You feel dead but content
Numb and full of love.
Tired but you cannot sleep,
and you reach out and do things
that you never thought you'd want to.
I feel wadded up
Like a crumpled bag
Thrown in the trash
But it's okay
Because there
everyone is so in love with you
They care so much about me here
I want to leave so badly.
They are the sweetest but...
It is love from the darkness I want.
We always desire what we cannot have
and fall victim to this lust.
But strangely we are happy
and it goes for me
How it always does.
I feel like throwing it all away
and living with no one
Seeing blindly
Kindly Threateningly
I want the hurtful love
Sweetly Nausea
The true love makes me sick.
My ill feelings
Will not go away
Not sure I want them to
And I'm stuck writing these terrible poems
And too lazy to make them rhyme or make sense.
I long I long
I want it now
Just make me flow
In many pieces
and drift all around
up and down
And get this feeling
or lack of it
Away. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 64 [informant] => assassinatorgirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
Feeling

Contributed by assassinatorgirl on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:42:25 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



It is so hard
explaining a feeling
You feel dead but content
Numb and full of love.
Tired but you cannot sleep,
and you reach out and do things
that you never thought you'd want to.
I feel wadded up
Like a crumpled bag
Thrown in the trash
But it's okay
Because there
everyone is so in love with you
They care so much about me here
I want to leave so badly.
They are the sweetest but...
It is love from the darkness I want.
We always desire what we cannot have
and fall victim to this lust.
But strangely we are happy
and it goes for me
How it always does.
I feel like throwing it all away
and living with no one
Seeing blindly
Kindly Threateningly
I want the hurtful love
Sweetly Nausea
The true love makes me sick.
My ill feelings
Will not go away
Not sure I want them to
And I'm stuck writing these terrible poems
And too lazy to make them rhyme or make sense.
I long I long
I want it now
Just make me flow
In many pieces
and drift all around
up and down
And get this feeling
or lack of it
Away.




Copyright © assassinatorgirl ... [ 2005-01-02 22:42:25]
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Re: Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:57:07 PM AEST
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"We always desire what we cannot have"

Absolutely 100% true.

Awesome write.


Re: Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:51:11 PM AEST
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haha, i like this poem, its kinda funny


Re: Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:46:59 PM AEST
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Nice write.

Spazzo




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