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Array ( [sid] => 78220 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blade Lover [time] => 2005-01-02 22:00:35 [hometext] => Everyone has their demons, mine may disappear over time or consume me all together...written in on/off rhyme, so if ya read this cool, if not no worries, maybe the poem under mine is more to your taste. [bodytext] => Blade Lover

Crystal ice runs down my skin,
Following the engraved paths of sin,
Gold covered in silver coated runes,
Made in the time of the blood moons,

Sensual and smoothly it slides,
Creeping slowly deeper inside,
Seeking depth and warmth,
Drinking deep from the source,
Shivers of ecstasy run wild,
Opening lust, where love is filed,

Caressing tendrils of released tears,
Cascading drops, echoing in my ears,
Overflowing heat as the warmth spreads,
Cells divide as the ice penetrates deeper,
Laying bare a glistening plain,
Steam rises as porcelain cools,

I swim gently in my fluids upon my floor,
My head lulls on the smooth wooden grain,
A metallic fragrance blends with old pine,
Tantalizing and overloading my senses,
My eyes slowly close as I fade into dreams,
My heart lingers a little longer in pleasures grasp,

Finally I lay still floating in a pool molten fire,
With my arms across my chest I sleep,
Finally free of my nightmares,
Here I lay naked and empty,
Embraced in passionate darkness,
Two lovers bound forever together,
My crimson coated blade and I.


By Sapphire Blue
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Sapphire_Blue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Blade Lover

Contributed by Sapphire_Blue on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:00:35 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Blade Lover

Crystal ice runs down my skin,
Following the engraved paths of sin,
Gold covered in silver coated runes,
Made in the time of the blood moons,

Sensual and smoothly it slides,
Creeping slowly deeper inside,
Seeking depth and warmth,
Drinking deep from the source,
Shivers of ecstasy run wild,
Opening lust, where love is filed,

Caressing tendrils of released tears,
Cascading drops, echoing in my ears,
Overflowing heat as the warmth spreads,
Cells divide as the ice penetrates deeper,
Laying bare a glistening plain,
Steam rises as porcelain cools,

I swim gently in my fluids upon my floor,
My head lulls on the smooth wooden grain,
A metallic fragrance blends with old pine,
Tantalizing and overloading my senses,
My eyes slowly close as I fade into dreams,
My heart lingers a little longer in pleasures grasp,

Finally I lay still floating in a pool molten fire,
With my arms across my chest I sleep,
Finally free of my nightmares,
Here I lay naked and empty,
Embraced in passionate darkness,
Two lovers bound forever together,
My crimson coated blade and I.


By Sapphire Blue




Copyright © Sapphire_Blue ... [ 2005-01-02 22:00:35]
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Re: Blade Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by meganloberg on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:56:24 PM AEST
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"My head lulls on the smooth wooden grain"

I think I could read that line over and over and over and over. Oh wait, I did.

...Nice


Re: Blade Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 12:26:30 AM AEST
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Ya we all seeems to be going through something or another.
take care.good write.


Re: Blade Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:16:17 AM AEST
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great write sapphire.
powerful.
LOT's O LUB
*~givingin~*


Re: Blade Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:16:00 AM AEST
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OMG you have a poem up, at long last i could actually read your poems again yay!!!!. This is really good, i love this lines the best

Sensual and smoothly it slides,
Creeping slowly deeper inside,
Seeking depth and warmth,
Drinking deep from the source,
Shivers of ecstasy run wild,
Opening lust, where love is filed,

Now thats a poem.

Hugs,
Jane x

P.S. I just checked your profile you laready have 5 poems before this.


Re: Blade Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:33:08 AM AEST
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that was expertly written, sad yet beautiful expression, a work of poetic art
pixie xx


Re: Blade Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:38:27 PM AEST
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"I swim gently in my fluids upon my floor,"
Lol that was kind of disturbing, but this was a
great poem, you wrote of suicide expertly. A
well written wonderfully worded (hmm some
alliteration) poem. I enjoyed it immensely and
shall read it again. Hope to see more stuff by
you soon.

Bobo (Joel)




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