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Array ( [sid] => 78217 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Does She Dare? [time] => 2005-01-02 21:25:24 [hometext] => Please comment [bodytext] => She sits there staring at the object in her hands
The thing that could end her life
No one understands
What she wants to do with that knife

Because everything has gone wrong
This was to only way to escape her pain
She tried so hard to be strong
Tried not to complain
But it had taken over her
Constantly dealing with it all

Her family didn’t care about her
Her life at home was just a blur
Filled with screaming and hatred
Even when she was just a little kid

She sits there staring at the object in her hands
The thing that could end her life
No on understands
What she wants to do with that knife

She didn’t really have any friends
The ones she had didn’t really care
They aren’t there when she considers her bitter end
Will she do it? Does she dare?

Because everything has gone wrong
This is the only way to escape her pain
She tried so hard to be strong
Tried so hard not to complain
But it has taken over her
Constantly dealing with it all

If only she had someone to talk to
Someone to help her through
Maybe this wouldn’t be happening
But it is
Because she kept it locked up inside

Because everything has gone wrong
This is the only way to escape her pain
She tried so hard to be strong
Tried so hard not to complain
But it has taken over her
Constantly dealing with it all

She sits there staring at the object in her hands
The thing that could end her life
No one understands
What she wants to do with that Knife

Will she do it? Does she dare?
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Does She Dare?

Contributed by Tru2Myself on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:25:24 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

She sits there staring at the object in her hands
The thing that could end her life
No one understands
What she wants to do with that knife

Because everything has gone wrong
This was to only way to escape her pain
She tried so hard to be strong
Tried not to complain
But it had taken over her
Constantly dealing with it all

Her family didn’t care about her
Her life at home was just a blur
Filled with screaming and hatred
Even when she was just a little kid

She sits there staring at the object in her hands
The thing that could end her life
No on understands
What she wants to do with that knife

She didn’t really have any friends
The ones she had didn’t really care
They aren’t there when she considers her bitter end
Will she do it? Does she dare?

Because everything has gone wrong
This is the only way to escape her pain
She tried so hard to be strong
Tried so hard not to complain
But it has taken over her
Constantly dealing with it all

If only she had someone to talk to
Someone to help her through
Maybe this wouldn’t be happening
But it is
Because she kept it locked up inside

Because everything has gone wrong
This is the only way to escape her pain
She tried so hard to be strong
Tried so hard not to complain
But it has taken over her
Constantly dealing with it all

She sits there staring at the object in her hands
The thing that could end her life
No one understands
What she wants to do with that Knife

Will she do it? Does she dare?

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Re: Does She Dare? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:42:44 PM AEST
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life in the balance, feelings on one side emptiness on the other, cool poem, touching on a subject many have been and some never returned, a choice I contemplated, guess since im still here you know my discision. excellently woven poem.

Re: Does She Dare? (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:43:22 PM AEST
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I hope she does

Re: Does She Dare? (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:08:49 PM AEST
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Well I hope that knife is only used for food!!!
I believe that Suicide will never help....as one day everything you've ever done will be staring back at your face and killing anyone or any thing is a big sin...
Your write was good but to answer your question ...For Her Own Sake don't do it!!!

Re: Does She Dare? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:02:55 PM AEST
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Such a sad, sad write.
She better not dare to!

Re: Does She Dare? (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:15:08 PM AEST
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I guess because I've been there and know the consequences..I know how selfish it is, even though I also know the pain inside that produces such thinking..writing about it helps vent..but therapy helps too..

Re: Does She Dare? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:38:23 AM AEST
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Well u have me conveinced but please tell me this is jus writing?
huggs, luv, hope, faith, prayer,
emy

Re: Does She Dare? (User Rating: 1 )
by blueeyedevil13 on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:47:27 AM AEST
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i agree with afterdark. i hope she does. something tells me that if she doesnt her life will only get worse. and also cause im sadistic.

Re: Does She Dare? (User Rating: 1 )
by blueeyedevil13 on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:47:28 AM AEST
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i agree with afterdark. i hope she does. something tells me that if she doesnt her life will only get worse. and also cause im sadistic.

Re: Does She Dare? (User Rating: 1 )
by Unheard_Mute on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:06:01 PM AEST
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cutting is so horrible, I have so many friends that do it... it does nothing but make me worry... hope you feel better, I'm here to help if I can, I've been told I'm good at it...

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