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beautiful and kind
a warm and helpful smile.
holding you behing closed doors
i love you all the while.
did u know ive never been this happy
just lying next to you?
a sweet melting sensation
heavy hands feel me through.
romantic talk,
sudden utter silence.
express my love in words
...in what may seem like violence.
blood that tastes like sugar
whens mine always tasted like death.
light and simple cuts
not meant to compromise health.
living on your heart beat,
your breathe blowing in my ear.
so scared i could someday lose you
so much more void of fear.
probably a better person
almost sure its true.
if not better, happier.
cant say much more than, i love you.
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a different color of love

Contributed by x-fetuseater4life-x on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 05:35:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

you-
beautiful and kind
a warm and helpful smile.
holding you behing closed doors
i love you all the while.
did u know ive never been this happy
just lying next to you?
a sweet melting sensation
heavy hands feel me through.
romantic talk,
sudden utter silence.
express my love in words
...in what may seem like violence.
blood that tastes like sugar
whens mine always tasted like death.
light and simple cuts
not meant to compromise health.
living on your heart beat,
your breathe blowing in my ear.
so scared i could someday lose you
so much more void of fear.
probably a better person
almost sure its true.
if not better, happier.
cant say much more than, i love you.

Copyright © x-fetuseater4life-x ... [ 2005-01-02 17:35:42]
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Re: a different color of love (User Rating: 1 )
by Sk8ergrl_911 on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 05:42:13 PM AEST
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heartfelt, but also very deep, awesome

Re: a different color of love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 07:40:29 PM AEST
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So true and it rings. I hope he read this.
best of luck!

Re: a different color of love (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 08:18:36 PM AEST
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Beautiful. I really like this poem. Good job.

Re: a different color of love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:09:26 PM AEST
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Such a sweet and romantic write! I really liked it. Nice work.

Re: a different color of love (User Rating: 1 )
by SensitiveSoAbused on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:50:55 PM AEST
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i hated this poem.

Imagine dippppping your hannnnd into

Liquid Nitrogen...

So cold it crystalizes
splinters in shards

texture so rough like broken cheerios

Convulse and shatter
and never isosceles

Such then, friend of equilateral...
does my heart
when I read this poem...

and that cold feeling in my gutttttt

my ear canal my capilaries
are dripping slipping sliding down.........

my intestines are barbed wire
throttling my spine

This is a silent rape, dear,
wherein asphyxiation settles wild eyes
with hand over mouth and nose and

toes are no longer moving but for such lurching thrusting.

Re: a different color of love (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 01:00:19 PM AEST
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Nice poem.. I liked it..

Take care
Christina

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