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Array ( [sid] => 78160 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Look What You Did [time] => 2005-01-02 14:39:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Every one is mad at me for some thing I didn't do. All I have to say is thank you. Thank you for being the one who makes me cry. Thank you for makeing me say fare-well and good-bye. Thank you for being the last person I'd ever turn to. But now I'm not to sure about what to do. I can't turn to you because our relationship is through. Who do I turn to when nobody is there, when no body is there to help me through this. Should I do a dare. Do I dare try and talk to you again? How do I know if you will be a friend? I thought I could trust you but then you proved me rong. You made me feel like i didn't belong. Your were the last person I'd expect this from. You made me feel like I was just scum, scum on some ones sheo in this game of life.You better hope the next person you do this to doesn't go for a nife. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 6 [informant] => punkhead13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Look What You Did

Contributed by punkhead13 on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 02:39:06 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Every one is mad at me for some thing I didn't do. All I have to say is thank you. Thank you for being the one who makes me cry. Thank you for makeing me say fare-well and good-bye. Thank you for being the last person I'd ever turn to. But now I'm not to sure about what to do. I can't turn to you because our relationship is through. Who do I turn to when nobody is there, when no body is there to help me through this. Should I do a dare. Do I dare try and talk to you again? How do I know if you will be a friend? I thought I could trust you but then you proved me rong. You made me feel like i didn't belong. Your were the last person I'd expect this from. You made me feel like I was just scum, scum on some ones sheo in this game of life.You better hope the next person you do this to doesn't go for a nife.

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Re: Look What You Did (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 02:43:57 PM AEST
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Ok first off, once I could seperate the lines in my head I thought it was great...but just a heads up, take some time to get what you want to say across, type it correctly, make sure of your spelling, and press the enter/return button on the keyboard after each line you type...I read on here somewhere that newer members may get kicked off for these small errors...This was an excellent piece though

Mason

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