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Array ( [sid] => 7815 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => owls of the night [time] => 2002-12-02 05:30:00 [hometext] => i worte this almost not understanding what i was trying to say, maybe i will know when i am finished. [bodytext] =>
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shiny cars, fast and sleek and neon colors
glittery jewelry and tite leather miniskirts
wild makeup, glowing ravers
hyper crazy wild fun

wake up when the sun goes down
take your girls for a night on the town
flirt shamelessly until the dawn
when the day turns itself back on

hyper crazy wild fun
move move move and run run run
free to watch the flashing lights
another one of the hip hop nights
techno blastin speakers loud
energetic adrenaline sound

single dancing clubs run wild
racers ravers party child
bouncing to the disco beats
everyone moving platformed feet

part your ways when dawn is broken
keep drink coasters as a remembrance token
keep your freedom in a box
and tame the party's crazy shocks

and tomoro morning...if ur lucky...hangover!

Ty gurrr lillee [comments] => 1 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 48 [informant] => dantoad [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

owls of the night

Contributed by dantoad on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

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shiny cars, fast and sleek and neon colors
glittery jewelry and tite leather miniskirts
wild makeup, glowing ravers
hyper crazy wild fun

wake up when the sun goes down
take your girls for a night on the town
flirt shamelessly until the dawn
when the day turns itself back on

hyper crazy wild fun
move move move and run run run
free to watch the flashing lights
another one of the hip hop nights
techno blastin speakers loud
energetic adrenaline sound

single dancing clubs run wild
racers ravers party child
bouncing to the disco beats
everyone moving platformed feet

part your ways when dawn is broken
keep drink coasters as a remembrance token
keep your freedom in a box
and tame the party's crazy shocks

and tomoro morning...if ur lucky...hangover!

Ty gurrr lillee

Copyright © dantoad ... [ 2002-12-02 05:30:00]
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Re: owls of the night (User Rating: 1 )
by RealCrystal on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 08:25:38 PM AEST
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I like this one, it tells of the party life, and I especially like the last line where it says, "and tomoro morning...if ur lucky"

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