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Know not the meaning of undying love
Preoccupied by sustaining their superior rank
They have no one but their selves to thank
Perceived as innocent, yet this they do feign
Heaven is not for the pure to reign
Narcissistic and treacherous, soon they shall fall
And demons shall dominate over all
Tearing the angels part by part
For triviality had consumed their hearts
Hacking of their bright, white wings
With only a mournful melody to sing
All five of their sense shall experience pain
For they had become so greatly vein
With the innocence they did feign
Heaven is now where the demons shall reign [comments] => 6 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 13 [informant] => EternalNight4x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Narcissistic Angel

Contributed by EternalNight4x on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:45:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Purest angels from heaven above
Know not the meaning of undying love
Preoccupied by sustaining their superior rank
They have no one but their selves to thank
Perceived as innocent, yet this they do feign
Heaven is not for the pure to reign
Narcissistic and treacherous, soon they shall fall
And demons shall dominate over all
Tearing the angels part by part
For triviality had consumed their hearts
Hacking of their bright, white wings
With only a mournful melody to sing
All five of their sense shall experience pain
For they had become so greatly vein
With the innocence they did feign
Heaven is now where the demons shall reign

Copyright © EternalNight4x ... [ 2005-01-01 23:45:16]
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Re: Narcissistic Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:50:08 PM AEST
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its vain, by the way. excellent and amazing write. very original and exceptionally written. started strong and ended powerfully.

Re: Narcissistic Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:56:29 PM AEST
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Gonne agree with E9, here,
Fantastic write. Very powerful.
Also perfect flow.

Great write, Keep writing, I'll keep reading. lol.

*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Narcissistic Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 12:35:21 AM AEST
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this was a real well written poem even
though I didn't agree with the message. Very
poetic and beautifully expressed. I also loved
the title.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Narcissistic Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by dartsofplsre87 on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 01:09:15 AM AEST
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Wow! great poem...

Re: Narcissistic Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by blacksabbath026 on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 12:45:23 PM AEST
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very well written

Re: Narcissistic Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 05:33:37 PM AEST
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I really liked the how angels seemed to be demons on the inside.
most enjoyable.

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