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Array ( [sid] => 78106 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my new years kiss [time] => 2005-01-01 23:32:16 [hometext] => ** wrote this for my so called friend who at midnight on the first new years i had someone to share it with, my best friend stole my date and ruined everything [bodytext] => HOW COULD YOU JUST HURT ME LIKE THIS,
was it worth the new years kiss that belonged to me,
HOW COULD YOU MAKE ME LOOK LIKE A FOOL
use my love as an unwanted tool.

I NEVER HID HOW I FELT,
now look at the hand I was dealt.
YOU'LL NEVER UNDERSTAND ME
but maybe it the way its meant to be,

IF YOU CARED A LITTLE AT ALL,
you wouldn't of made me make the call,
but you don't care
i was wrong to care
for once I let my feelings be shared
and was left alone to cry [comments] => 6 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 48 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

my new years kiss

Contributed by brokenwings on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:32:16 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

HOW COULD YOU JUST HURT ME LIKE THIS,
was it worth the new years kiss that belonged to me,
HOW COULD YOU MAKE ME LOOK LIKE A FOOL
use my love as an unwanted tool.

I NEVER HID HOW I FELT,
now look at the hand I was dealt.
YOU'LL NEVER UNDERSTAND ME
but maybe it the way its meant to be,

IF YOU CARED A LITTLE AT ALL,
you wouldn't of made me make the call,
but you don't care
i was wrong to care
for once I let my feelings be shared
and was left alone to cry

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2005-01-01 23:32:16]
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Re: my new years kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:38:28 PM AEST
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ouch, this is a painful experience... I liked the rawness of this write

Re: my new years kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:54:26 PM AEST
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she certainly showed her true colors. hopefully karma will give her a bite in the ..... i have a saying about trust. trust can kill you or set your free, choose your prison wisely.

Re: my new years kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 12:04:40 AM AEST
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Ugh...I hate when that happens.
I can understand this alot. Not the part of having a guy stolen, the part where you are betrayed. I can relate to that. I know how it feels.

If you ever need to talk, PM me, K?

Great write. I can really see how you feel in this.

*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: my new years kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 12:15:11 AM AEST
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Oh me this is sad but mostly very moving and sounds like u got the last word and very smart u r.
A masterpeice as many can relate.
Keep writing 'cause u r an awesome writer.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: my new years kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 01:09:30 AM AEST
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life.....aint it great ^_^ betrayal is a part of life, and a common factor. It never hurts any less, but once you learn to limit the trust you put in people and well hope for the best, expect the worst.....you'll be fine.....

p.s. us guys....we're not worth it.....trust me...just let it go.....you gots lots of time...

always, abraham

Re: my new years kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 04:06:33 AM AEST
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emotional....great job....i love the style

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