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Array ( [sid] => 78100 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => wish i could wake [time] => 2005-01-01 22:07:31 [hometext] => im so sick of wakeing up in the dark i live in wisconsin and i hate winter .... oh i hate my alarm clock too [bodytext] => shocked to wake
turn on the light
slip out of my sheets
it still looks like night

I look in the mirror
but i dont see me
its a good girl i see
but she doesnt have to be

with a wind burned face
and dried out skin
its winter to which
i hate to wake

then........

Gental light graces my eyes
with one breath warm air
i slip out of my sheets
and in to my suit

down by the water
the sun it glistens
and seems to say " your free,
so embrace this sweet day"

to my cold and creamy coffie
and my fresh water lake
its summer to which
i wish i could wake
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wish i could wake

Contributed by wakegurl77 on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:07:31 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

shocked to wake
turn on the light
slip out of my sheets
it still looks like night

I look in the mirror
but i dont see me
its a good girl i see
but she doesnt have to be

with a wind burned face
and dried out skin
its winter to which
i hate to wake

then........

Gental light graces my eyes
with one breath warm air
i slip out of my sheets
and in to my suit

down by the water
the sun it glistens
and seems to say " your free,
so embrace this sweet day"

to my cold and creamy coffie
and my fresh water lake
its summer to which
i wish i could wake

Copyright © wakegurl77 ... [ 2005-01-01 22:07:31]
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Re: wish i could wake (User Rating: 1 )
by Summerwine on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:14:45 PM AEST
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Winter in Wisconsin may be a bit cold
But the winter is God's way of renewing the old
So come on now, hop out of that bed
Summer is really not too far ahead...
I enjoyed your poem..take care, Yvonne

Re: wish i could wake (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:17:55 PM AEST
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excellent write. i also hate my alarm clock. i like waking up when it looks like night though, im not blinded by the sun. and when i dont have to wake up, i wake up when its sunny outside anyway. =]

Re: wish i could wake (User Rating: 1 )
by LittleWillow on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 12:35:47 AM AEST
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Yeah, I know what you're saying.... I'm from Stevens Point. Winter in Wisconsin does kinda suck. I can't stand waking up to dark.
Good poem.
Peace and love,
~*LittleWillow*~

Re: wish i could wake (User Rating: 1 )
by TheEarlyNovember on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 02:39:57 AM AEST
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oh man I feel the same way about winter. Only like 3 months till April which is nice. As for the alarm clock I can't relate. My mother still wakes me. God im a loser. w00t w00t

p.s this is my new favorite write

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