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Teal green grass
Pink blossed trees
Big hungry eyes
Gone my house of sash A piece of bread peeze
In mothers arms a child dies
Every cloud a silver lining
Fields of golden grain
Let freedom ring
A thousand starving
Sickness and hunger pains
Gun shots bombs blasting
Morning sunrise golden sunset
Starlit night
Venus and Mars
Bodies burnt fires lit
The world o'r so many fight
Generations bare scars
Nothing but blue skies
Gentel comes the rain
Sunrays and rainbow
Tens of thousand die
Eyes drained
Bodies bloat
Clear blue skies
Peacefulness
Doves music fills the air
Thousands thousands ask why
A child floats no last caress
A hundred thousand die
O'the sky so ever blue
Birds sing loves tune
A child a child is born
A sip of water ever so cool
Cries of a December morn
Peaceful is a doves coo
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My World

Contributed by Sinned on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:36:44 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Angel blue skies
Teal green grass
Pink blossed trees
Big hungry eyes
Gone my house of sash A piece of bread peeze
In mothers arms a child dies
Every cloud a silver lining
Fields of golden grain
Let freedom ring
A thousand starving
Sickness and hunger pains
Gun shots bombs blasting
Morning sunrise golden sunset
Starlit night
Venus and Mars
Bodies burnt fires lit
The world o'r so many fight
Generations bare scars
Nothing but blue skies
Gentel comes the rain
Sunrays and rainbow
Tens of thousand die
Eyes drained
Bodies bloat
Clear blue skies
Peacefulness
Doves music fills the air
Thousands thousands ask why
A child floats no last caress
A hundred thousand die
O'the sky so ever blue
Birds sing loves tune
A child a child is born
A sip of water ever so cool
Cries of a December morn
Peaceful is a doves coo

Copyright © Sinned ... [ 2005-01-01 05:36:44]
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Re: My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 05:47:08 AM AEST
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please Comment.

Sinned

Re: My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 06:31:14 AM AEST
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Excellent poem, loved the way it flowed and how each word you have chosen expressed the poem beautifully. cool write, thanx for sharing this.

Re: My World (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 10:23:54 PM AEST
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Good work. We should all care about our brothers and sisters around the world involved in the horrible tragedies that are occuring. So many lives lost, not just because of war but also nature. We must join hands and forces to aid these victims.

Blessings, Dove

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