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Array ( [sid] => 77995 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fight [time] => 2005-01-01 02:14:25 [hometext] => this poem is about me and my mom and dad i wrote it when i a fight was going on and this is really what happened well hope u like it [bodytext] => It burns
But my mind yerns
The blade cutting my wrist
I wanna be next on death's list
Tonight my friends are having fun
But your not done
You gotta fight,
Til' the sun comes up "bright"
Yelling,fighting,argueing and crying
All about lying
Then you act like nothings wrong
The fight was so long
But Im used to it
My brother is not, well just a little bit
Hes gonna grow up to be depressed like me
I dont wanna this to be
Your such a boozer
And you go out and be a loser
I'll sit here,act like nothings wrong
I'll make the cuts extra long

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 6 [informant] => sick_n_twisted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Fight

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 02:14:25 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

It burns
But my mind yerns
The blade cutting my wrist
I wanna be next on death's list
Tonight my friends are having fun
But your not done
You gotta fight,
Til' the sun comes up "bright"
Yelling,fighting,argueing and crying
All about lying
Then you act like nothings wrong
The fight was so long
But Im used to it
My brother is not, well just a little bit
Hes gonna grow up to be depressed like me
I dont wanna this to be
Your such a boozer
And you go out and be a loser
I'll sit here,act like nothings wrong
I'll make the cuts extra long

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-01-01 02:14:25]
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Re: Fight (User Rating: 1 )
by unforgiven on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 04:13:58 AM AEST
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wow.....this is such an emotional and compelling poem. i really love this one. how you explain the cutting and the reason's behind it is excellent. i have been in the same situation you have and couldn't put it into words...but i'm glad you have because it has made a great poem.
~becca~

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