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Your love was never real enough. You thought you could make it work...you were wrong.

You only know when it feels good, don't you? Well this time the hourglass ran empty. You souldn't have knocked it off the table. The best was yet to come.

You just watched us fall away. The pieces are on the floor. Shattered existence.

I hope you wrote your name on every one. Gripe about what I've done and you know you are the monster you hate. You said it yourself...'It's a bullcrap reason,' but just to save face you'll lie till it's true.

Your love wasn't real enough. You only know when it feels good, don't you? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 308 [topic] => 6 [informant] => andthefoolshallburn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Sometimes You Lie So Much You Believe It Yourself

Contributed by andthefoolshallburn on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 10:57:55 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You're probably right this time. Razors aren't child-friendly and love never mixes with pills. I watched life slowly swirl away and came to one conclusion...

Your love was never real enough. You thought you could make it work...you were wrong.

You only know when it feels good, don't you? Well this time the hourglass ran empty. You souldn't have knocked it off the table. The best was yet to come.

You just watched us fall away. The pieces are on the floor. Shattered existence.

I hope you wrote your name on every one. Gripe about what I've done and you know you are the monster you hate. You said it yourself...'It's a bullcrap reason,' but just to save face you'll lie till it's true.

Your love wasn't real enough. You only know when it feels good, don't you?

Copyright © andthefoolshallburn ... [ 2004-12-31 22:57:55]
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Re: Sometimes You Lie So Much You Believe It Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 01:22:50 AM AEST
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well besides the literary element, i dont think this is very poetic. ::shrugs:: but ive been wrong before, so my opinion isnt exactly something to believe, lol.

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