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Array ( [sid] => 77955 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For David [time] => 2004-12-31 19:55:49 [hometext] => OK this is my very first happy poem. the dude i wrote this for has ruined my dream of becoming the next edgar allen poe but thats ok. lol give me ur opinions! [bodytext] => I’m scared
There’s no one there
To hold me in my despair
But now your there

I see you
Through my tears
I see you
No more fears.

I can’t help
But wonder if it’s true
Do you love me?
I know I love you.

Hold me in your arms one last time
Hold me and I’ll say your mine
And ill be yours

Love me with all your heart
And love me with all your soul.
Nothing can come between
The world that is our own

Love is all there is.
Love is all we need
Don’t ever hurt me
Don’t ever let me bleed.

Love me for always
Always be true
Always be there for me
And I'll always be there for you.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 2 [informant] => crazylady [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

For David

Contributed by crazylady on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 07:55:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I’m scared
There’s no one there
To hold me in my despair
But now your there

I see you
Through my tears
I see you
No more fears.

I can’t help
But wonder if it’s true
Do you love me?
I know I love you.

Hold me in your arms one last time
Hold me and I’ll say your mine
And ill be yours

Love me with all your heart
And love me with all your soul.
Nothing can come between
The world that is our own

Love is all there is.
Love is all we need
Don’t ever hurt me
Don’t ever let me bleed.

Love me for always
Always be true
Always be there for me
And I'll always be there for you.

Copyright Â© crazylady ... [ 2004-12-31 19:55:49]
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Re: For David (User Rating: 1 )
by Pollo_Picante1120 on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 08:27:46 PM AEST
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This poem is very meaningful. I enjoyed the structure of the poem. And your not the next edgar allen poe, but your poem reflects intense feelings as that of many of Poe's writings. Congrats! Something I can actually relate to. Well Done!
**Heather**

Re: For David (User Rating: 1 )
by poorgirl on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 08:30:39 PM AEST
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I think this is great..Who cares what ppl think of what you write..Keep wriritng.

Re: For David (User Rating: 1 )
by crazylady on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 08:34:05 PM AEST
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thank yall so much. i wanted to b edgar allen poe(if u dont believe me read my other stuff by crazylady and alwayslost. i rly have feelings for david and i wrote this while talkin to him. he seemed to like the poem too! lol. thanx yall!
-cec

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