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Contributed by
breny
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Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:55:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I've lost all my friends
but I've also gained you
but I'm not even certain
I won't loose you too
I love you so much
at least I think I do
I love it when we touch
and I know that you do too
But that is all that works
and yet there should be more
you aren't like other jerks
cuz you don't send me out the door
so lets not end it here
we need to work on it
I'll dry up all my tears
If you stop throwing fits
If this ends I'll be left with nothing
But at least, for now, I have SOMETHING
Copyright ©
breny
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2004-12-31 18:55:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: something
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 08:22:10 PM AEST (User
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very nice,I liked the way it flowed.And the ending was good |
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Re: something
(User Rating: 1 ) by O7NeVeS on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 10:03:23 PM AEST (User
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Hey...I really like this poem b/c i can relate so much to it. That's almost how i feel now in regards to my poem about "My SiR". Keep writing...and thanks for ur comments bout my poems!! =) TD |
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Re: something
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:16:35 PM AEST (User
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damm your good, this is a beautiflul testament 2 love, a bit of pleaing and some afermation, a touch
of frustraion fused with remorse, never the less u
certainly know how 2 get your point accross, well done . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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