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Love Me
Contributed by
bonita2689
on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:00:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I hope this ecstasy
drowns me
swallows me whole
encompassing
your eyes fiery with passion
this love
I can only imagine
you
its what you do
to me
don't you see
watch me breathe
it's in my song
the life you bring
the life you give
to me
let me sing
show you my love
embrace me
your promises
lace me
in happiness
share this bliss
with one last kiss
I'll ask you sweetly
remember this
Love me
Copyright ©
bonita2689
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2004-12-31 17:00:30]
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Re: Love Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by luna_mica on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:06:43 PM AEST
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| hmm... nice poem. i like it. |
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Re: Love Me
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by Kitty_cat on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:57:39 PM AEST
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I like the rhythm and the ending. Well written
cat xx |
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