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To Fade
Contributed by
poorgirl
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Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 04:56:03 PM in AEST
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Lie down with your troubles behind you. Take a breath and feel the life within you. The world isnt perfect but you can try to be. Here she loves you but if you leave she will defy you. Stay and be loved in the land of promisses, no other can make you feel this way. So full and useful now everything has meaning, now you have a reason to go on. The darkness isn't gone but its fadding and in time it shale leave your saddened soul.
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Re: To Fade
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by Kellros on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:12:59 PM AEST
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| its true people can try to be perfect, but they'll never be, because they measure perfection by their own measures, some things in life can't be measured. everything has cause, not meaning, some things you can only experience... i liked your poem, quite inspirational |
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