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Death
Contributed by
BuggY
on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 03:26:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Death is nasty,
Death is mean,
Death is what we all have seen!
We don’t like death!
Who does?!
It usually gives us a weird little fuzz.
It hurts you when someone u love goes…
But the feeling you had for them should still flow…
When someone dies, they don’t stop loving you,
But one thing u must do is love them too.
They keep you in their hearts forever and ever!
One day you will be with that person… together.
I am writing this poem because I have lost so many loves,
But all my worries are taken by many doves,
I know they are all watching me,
I just want you all to know, I still love you so,
Until that day,
I will always pray,
I’m sorry for what I’ve done wrong,
But I must sing you this song…
Every step I take, every move I make, every single day,
Every time I pray,
I’ll be missing you!
Thinking of the day, when u went away,
What lives to take, what bonds to break,
I’ll be missing you!! XxX !!
Copyright ©
BuggY
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2004-12-31 15:26:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kellros on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 05:45:15 PM AEST (User
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Why do people die? a simple question, but have you thought about it, what it would be like to live forever, every mistake you make, every scar living with you everyday of your life... i think allot of people lack the time to properly think about the aspects of life and the things regarding it, ok write, very innocent? |
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Re: Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by breny on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:22:44 PM AEST (User
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this poem flows very well and i like it alot. it talks about something that everyone goes through so everyone can relate. good job :-D
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Re: Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mesano on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 08:42:40 AM AEST (User
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good poem, yet again you have captured so much emotion... i like that :) and i really liked your ending, that last stanza really jumped out at me
-Nicki |
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