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Array ( [sid] => 77918 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hate has killed me [time] => 2004-12-31 14:14:16 [hometext] => please comment [bodytext] => I hate this pain that痴 inside of me
I cant let lose I知 bombed by depression reaped by emptyness
I知 going under I cant see any more
soul has been ripped from inside of me devoured by pain
unrelenting lashes of insanity brutal world has got the best of me
what the hell has this done to me
you will never under stand the hate that tares away at me
the feeling so verbose hope dissipates all is lost I知 trapped in this cage but do not know what it is
the vogue stench with in me this is the nightmare that I will never wake up from
what will happen to me this fallen soldier blood be spilt from this empty hopeless shell from hell
I知 that ***** of person that cant flip of the man that created me for he wouldn稚 even take the time to smite me because I知 already dead ill never wake up depression will reap what I have sewn [comments] => 1 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 48 [informant] => spirit_of_dark_tears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Hate has killed me

Contributed by spirit_of_dark_tears on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 02:14:16 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I hate this pain that痴 inside of me
I cant let lose I知 bombed by depression reaped by emptyness
I知 going under I cant see any more
soul has been ripped from inside of me devoured by pain
unrelenting lashes of insanity brutal world has got the best of me
what the hell has this done to me
you will never under stand the hate that tares away at me
the feeling so verbose hope dissipates all is lost I知 trapped in this cage but do not know what it is
the vogue stench with in me this is the nightmare that I will never wake up from
what will happen to me this fallen soldier blood be spilt from this empty hopeless shell from hell
I知 that ***** of person that cant flip of the man that created me for he wouldn稚 even take the time to smite me because I知 already dead ill never wake up depression will reap what I have sewn




Copyright ツゥ spirit_of_dark_tears ... [ 2004-12-31 14:14:16]
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Re: Hate has killed me (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 02:13:12 PM AEST
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very touching, i'm sorry 4 your pain . . .

Dorian Chambers





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