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Array ( [sid] => 77906 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please heartache [time] => 2004-12-31 13:19:39 [hometext] => I would really like to here what you think [bodytext] => Hello there heartache
My old friend
I've come to ask
If you can lend
Me a brand new soul
Til mine gets fixed
For in your grasp
Its been transfixed
Fascinated by evil
As well you know
Since its obvious to all
Who I love so

So please can you give
Me a brand new heart
One thats extra bullet-proof
And can't tear apart
One made from steel
One shut in tight
So no-one can enter
However hard they fight
And another thing
I want central heating
So I don't need love
For a warm, fuzzy feeling

My soul at the moment
Is hurt and broken
Horrible things have happened
That cannot be spoken
A seed was planted
Inside its core
By pure evil and beauty
By the one I adore
While Love grew
A small bud bloomed
And from then on
My soul was doomed

As months went by
A deep red rose
Formed in my soul
And warmly glows
But thorns they grew
And the flower bled
And suddenly one day
The rose was dead

So life was taken
A corpse remained
Deaths fingers spread
My soul was stained
Weeds grew in my heart
Stung its fragile walls
Maggots start to infest
As my dying spirit calls
In vain of love
It silently screams
For the one I worship
And his evil schemes...

The weeds are still growing
Its become an epidemic
You need to think of something quick
You can do it, your academic
Please give me a new heart to keep
Or a solution to clear away
The remains of the weeds and the rose
So I can escape this dismay

Please heartache, my old friend
Give me a new heart
Because memories of the one I love
Is tearing me apart

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kitty_cat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Please heartache

Contributed by Kitty_cat on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:19:39 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Hello there heartache
My old friend
I've come to ask
If you can lend
Me a brand new soul
Til mine gets fixed
For in your grasp
Its been transfixed
Fascinated by evil
As well you know
Since its obvious to all
Who I love so

So please can you give
Me a brand new heart
One thats extra bullet-proof
And can't tear apart
One made from steel
One shut in tight
So no-one can enter
However hard they fight
And another thing
I want central heating
So I don't need love
For a warm, fuzzy feeling

My soul at the moment
Is hurt and broken
Horrible things have happened
That cannot be spoken
A seed was planted
Inside its core
By pure evil and beauty
By the one I adore
While Love grew
A small bud bloomed
And from then on
My soul was doomed

As months went by
A deep red rose
Formed in my soul
And warmly glows
But thorns they grew
And the flower bled
And suddenly one day
The rose was dead

So life was taken
A corpse remained
Deaths fingers spread
My soul was stained
Weeds grew in my heart
Stung its fragile walls
Maggots start to infest
As my dying spirit calls
In vain of love
It silently screams
For the one I worship
And his evil schemes...

The weeds are still growing
Its become an epidemic
You need to think of something quick
You can do it, your academic
Please give me a new heart to keep
Or a solution to clear away
The remains of the weeds and the rose
So I can escape this dismay

Please heartache, my old friend
Give me a new heart
Because memories of the one I love
Is tearing me apart





Copyright © Kitty_cat ... [ 2004-12-31 13:19:39]
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Re: Please heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:34:57 PM AEST
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good writing, emotional and deep
pixie xx


Re: Please heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by Ravensfire on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:46:47 PM AEST
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got me in my heart, i'm sorry.


Re: Please heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by someone2004 on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:56:53 PM AEST
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Good write.
It's very emotional and describes alot of how you feel on the inside.
Nice job


Re: Please heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:57:35 PM AEST
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it flowed very well and it seemed extremely heartfelt. good job :-D
*Bren*




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