 |
Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+ |
Custom Search
|
|
|
||||
| Welcome ! | Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link | 29-May 19:03:17 AEST | ||
|
|
||||
|
|
||||
|
|
||||
|
Array
(
[sid] => 77883
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Just another badly written song
[time] => 2004-12-31 10:03:23
[hometext] => this is pretty badly written, its a bit scatter brained but nevertheless if you could PLEASE comment i would appreciate it!
[bodytext] => She pulls her hair and screams…. Can’t stand it here any longer Im just so sick of the smell Things couldn’t have gone more wrong And it’s much too early to tell The future isn’t looking too bright now And the past is almost pitch black Its freezing outside and im not quite sure how Im going to find my way back My vision keeps blurring My hands have gone numb These memories recurring Seem to weigh over a ton The burden is harder to bear With every frostbitten step But why in gods name should I care? If im doomed only to fall or trip.. The future isn’t looking too bright now And the past is almost pitch black Its freezing outside and im not quite sure how Im going to find my way back This place is so full of hidden hatred It hides in the corners and darkest doorways The water here is sour and tainted And the walls are constantly rearranged There’s dried blood on the floor And bones built into the rafters And there won’t be any more Happily ever after’s So just give up, let it go down There’s no point anymore Just let it drown…. The future isn’t looking too bright now And the past is almost pitch black Its freezing outside and im not quite sure how Im going to find my way back Just remember girl… Death is a glutton and takes all he can So make sure to let him know You’re going to take your strongest stand And of your life, never let go just remember that life is worth something No matter how pointless at times it may seem There’s always at least one thing One small, half broken dream Its surprising how one dream can keep you On the hard, yet right road in life And steer you further towards the truth And keep your outlook bright So child, the futures brighter than you know And the past is far behind us And you’re going to make it, even though The road is hard; you’ve got to trust [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 43 [informant] => darkplaidbabe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
|
Menu
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©
Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster
All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com
All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.
Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com