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Array ( [sid] => 77859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sorry. [time] => 2004-12-31 01:54:35 [hometext] => My VERY first poem!! my favorite also [bodytext] => Sorry i couldn't tell you;
sorry i couldn't get it out.
Sorry when i tried to talk to you,
but no words would come out.

Sorry for screaming silent words
you could never hear.
Sorry i caused you so much pain
with my every tear.

Sorry for cutting myself
and making painful scars.
Sorry for not letting you hold me
with your loving arms.

Sorry for suffering in silence,
and feeling this pain.
It wont leave me alone
like an unbreakable chain.

Sorry for now smiling
when you wanted me to,
Sorry i never told you
how much i love you.

Sorry for staring at something
you couldn't see.
Sorry for being oh, so glad,
that your not like me.

Sorry. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Riot_Girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Sorry.

Contributed by Riot_Girl on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:54:35 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Sorry i couldn't tell you;
sorry i couldn't get it out.
Sorry when i tried to talk to you,
but no words would come out.

Sorry for screaming silent words
you could never hear.
Sorry i caused you so much pain
with my every tear.

Sorry for cutting myself
and making painful scars.
Sorry for not letting you hold me
with your loving arms.

Sorry for suffering in silence,
and feeling this pain.
It wont leave me alone
like an unbreakable chain.

Sorry for now smiling
when you wanted me to,
Sorry i never told you
how much i love you.

Sorry for staring at something
you couldn't see.
Sorry for being oh, so glad,
that your not like me.

Sorry.

Copyright © Riot_Girl ... [ 2004-12-31 01:54:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sorry. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 02:27:23 AM AEST
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Wow...for being your first poem, it's awesome! Great, great job!!

Re: Sorry. (User Rating: 1 )
by forgottenone_iam on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 02:57:13 AM AEST
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hey for being your first poem it was really really good i can relate to it, its good, keep writing.
KIMMIE

Re: Sorry. (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:07:48 AM AEST
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this is a wicked write for ur first poem. ur very talented and i can relate to every anguished word of ur poem....well done again!

Re: Sorry. (User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:15:11 AM AEST
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first poem? never would have guessed... i liked this poem... it showed lots of emotion that i could really feel, you do a good job of expressing yourself... keep it up

-Nicki

Re: Sorry. (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 08:29:07 AM AEST
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I hope that you go on to write many more !!
Don't ever put down that pen !!

Steve

Re: Sorry. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 09:22:47 AM AEST
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Well written
Well expressed
and well done.

Re: Sorry. (User Rating: 1 )
by Riot_Girl on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:41:00 AM AEST
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thanks for leaving very nice comments and reading my poetry! I had these poems on the last site but not many ppl commented.. so i stopped writing. But with your help from these comments and others have motovaited (how ever u spell it) me to continue again, thanks! :D

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