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who gave her something to believe in
he took it just as well
with all her heart she trusted him
she fell in love with a boy
who let her believe in lies
he had a face of an angel
and said beautiful words in disguise
she believed in a boy
whom she thought was the one
and even when he hurt her
she thought he could do no wrong
maybe she was a foolish girl
for having so much faith
he was just a lost soul
who took everything she gave
she wanted so badly to help him
and wanted him to love her
and even though she was dying inside
she could never seem to learn
she lost all her trust in that boy
the one with the angelic eyes
but she still loves him more
even though it's killing her inside

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About A Boy

Contributed by AnastasiaN on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:52:17 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

she gave her heart to a boy
who gave her something to believe in
he took it just as well
with all her heart she trusted him
she fell in love with a boy
who let her believe in lies
he had a face of an angel
and said beautiful words in disguise
she believed in a boy
whom she thought was the one
and even when he hurt her
she thought he could do no wrong
maybe she was a foolish girl
for having so much faith
he was just a lost soul
who took everything she gave
she wanted so badly to help him
and wanted him to love her
and even though she was dying inside
she could never seem to learn
she lost all her trust in that boy
the one with the angelic eyes
but she still loves him more
even though it's killing her inside

Copyright © AnastasiaN ... [ 2004-12-31 01:52:17]
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Re: About A Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:12:10 AM AEST
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aww wow this is very sad but brilliant...i can relate to every word of ur poem i really can...the last stanza was terrific 'but she still loves him more even though its killing her inside" beautiful that was me all over. youve captured ur feelings well. i can relate very much, this is a great poem!

Re: About A Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 11:08:18 AM AEST
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I just have to reach out and commend you for a Great Poem packed full of your emotional content and the way you have managed to bring your words of poetry to life by creating a clear image within this readers eye. The flow was smooth and this poem composed so beautifully. I want to Thank You for sharing your glowing talent and a little of yourself with the world and your fellow poets. Great Job. Please, keep your creative thoughts flowing so Your beautiful poetry keeps growing. Your Reading Fan, MickeyPigKnuckles :)

Re: About A Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 12:19:29 AM AEST
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great job...great flow...just a great write

Re: About A Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 05:11:16 PM AEST
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i hvae to say this is a really good poem sad yes iam sure the boy is sad for every thing he has done to you and is trying to be the one of you forever now time is all that can tell good write keep it up.

brad

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