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used to cut away the hurt and change your ending doom.
It's covered like the cuts made on your wrists
made from that blade's tempting kiss.
It's so hard to find that it can take years to see,
that the one you love could actually be me.
Then again if you look deeper than that,
you can see the lies from the place you're starring at.
It's not real, it's an illusion of your mind.
If you don't want it you can leave it behind.
If you want it to stay you can make more than you create.
Again you will change the ending of your fate.
It burns from the inside like the way a fire tears away a home.
Memories overfill your mind as do fans in a baseball dome.
Your life cuts quick like the heroin needle's prick.
It will disappear soon like a burning candle's wick.
The love you know will be changed
like a young girl's diary as she writes her dreams and wishes on the page.
You wont know the difference of what changes in your mind.
What you think now will soon be another kind.
Once you find that special "one" you'll know what's going on.
When you find that person, your song will have been sung. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 2 [informant] => acidicblasphemy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

LoVe

Contributed by acidicblasphemy on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 06:24:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Love is hidden from everyone like the razor in your room,
used to cut away the hurt and change your ending doom.
It's covered like the cuts made on your wrists
made from that blade's tempting kiss.
It's so hard to find that it can take years to see,
that the one you love could actually be me.
Then again if you look deeper than that,
you can see the lies from the place you're starring at.
It's not real, it's an illusion of your mind.
If you don't want it you can leave it behind.
If you want it to stay you can make more than you create.
Again you will change the ending of your fate.
It burns from the inside like the way a fire tears away a home.
Memories overfill your mind as do fans in a baseball dome.
Your life cuts quick like the heroin needle's prick.
It will disappear soon like a burning candle's wick.
The love you know will be changed
like a young girl's diary as she writes her dreams and wishes on the page.
You wont know the difference of what changes in your mind.
What you think now will soon be another kind.
Once you find that special "one" you'll know what's going on.
When you find that person, your song will have been sung.

Copyright © acidicblasphemy ... [ 2004-12-30 18:24:08]
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Re: LoVe (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Monday, 6th January 2014 @ 06:25:28 PM AEST
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I loved this, I love your use of words, thanks for sharing

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