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Array ( [sid] => 778 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Golden Hands On a Rusty Face [time] => 2002-07-20 07:05:53 [hometext] => Hello all :)
Its been a while!
This piece it is about the lives we live in respect of our "place".
The message I guess, is that regardless of our stature and prominant position, our purpose shall remain the same, whatever that may be to whomever.
This, (I hope!), is reflected in the name, and in particular the vison showing that regardless of a clock elegant looks, it shall move the same as any other.
Time shall tick and tock for all ;).
Enjoy,
Nick. [bodytext] => Such amorality frightens
spoke the doctor’s fancy words.

Such mindscape’s bring instability
the sane of upstanding social antiquations.

Forever hush the silent soliloquies; they speak not for the stable mind.

Oh! How times have changed from old,
how the world does spin out of sight.

Dear boy, the Tangerine skies of the mind you once knew; shall show you not where the true path lies

But the grey of a suit and tinge of a tie,
shall allow see, and there you may become.

A bowler hat worn if prestige shall beckon,
rolling hills making scenery home.

The hands of a watch moving similarly for all
the hands of irrelevance building only hope,

as time, shall never slow. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Nickolata [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Golden Hands On a Rusty Face

Contributed by Nickolata on Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 07:05:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Such amorality frightens
spoke the doctor’s fancy words.

Such mindscape’s bring instability
the sane of upstanding social antiquations.

Forever hush the silent soliloquies; they speak not for the stable mind.

Oh! How times have changed from old,
how the world does spin out of sight.

Dear boy, the Tangerine skies of the mind you once knew; shall show you not where the true path lies

But the grey of a suit and tinge of a tie,
shall allow see, and there you may become.

A bowler hat worn if prestige shall beckon,
rolling hills making scenery home.

The hands of a watch moving similarly for all
the hands of irrelevance building only hope,

as time, shall never slow.




Copyright © Nickolata ... [ 2002-07-20 07:05:53]
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Re: Golden Hands On a Rusty Face (User Rating: 1 )
by matlock on Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 07:22:55 AM AEST
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I like your usage of personification. I enjoyed it.

R
lungs not guns


Re: Golden Hands On a Rusty Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 07:25:48 AM AEST
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Nice to see you back Nick...and you're back in style. This is excellent work with a strong message. Looking forward to more from you.
Love Chrissie x


Re: Golden Hands On a Rusty Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 09:12:58 AM AEST
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Hey Nick...
Nice to read ya again
Awesome write!

Daniela





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