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Array ( [sid] => 7778 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I'm Sorry [time] => 2002-12-01 19:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => “I’m Sorry” - by J. Samuelson Copyright©2001 01/22

Woke up today at three A.M.
It’s now day three without you
Hung over, weak, and miserable
Can’t hide my eyes, I tried to.

Be just another ice cold day
Still can’t believe we’re through
It’s freezing cold, I’m all alone
With nothing left to cling to.

Last night I drank my anger
Today, I’ll face my reality
I’ll have to try to figure
What now is left here for me.

I must admit this to you
If ever, you should read this
I never shall forget you
You were my light in darkness.

I’m not at all upset with you
Just dealing with my grief
I don’t want you to think so
I’m sorry you can’t see.

I said some things I shouldn’t
I hope you can understand
I released some of my tension
To help me comprehend.

I hate it that you walked out
I guess it was best for you
I’m sorry that I wasn’t all
You needed me to be to.

I’m so sorry that I pushed you
For that, I take the blame
I’m sorry that I pressured you
I’m sorry, I drove you away.

I’m sorry, I wasn’t good enough
I did everything that I could
I’m sorry you said goodbye to me
I now feel so misunderstood.

I’m Sorry!!! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Joker17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
I'm Sorry

Contributed by Joker17 on Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



“I’m Sorry” - by J. Samuelson Copyright©2001 01/22

Woke up today at three A.M.
It’s now day three without you
Hung over, weak, and miserable
Can’t hide my eyes, I tried to.

Be just another ice cold day
Still can’t believe we’re through
It’s freezing cold, I’m all alone
With nothing left to cling to.

Last night I drank my anger
Today, I’ll face my reality
I’ll have to try to figure
What now is left here for me.

I must admit this to you
If ever, you should read this
I never shall forget you
You were my light in darkness.

I’m not at all upset with you
Just dealing with my grief
I don’t want you to think so
I’m sorry you can’t see.

I said some things I shouldn’t
I hope you can understand
I released some of my tension
To help me comprehend.

I hate it that you walked out
I guess it was best for you
I’m sorry that I wasn’t all
You needed me to be to.

I’m so sorry that I pushed you
For that, I take the blame
I’m sorry that I pressured you
I’m sorry, I drove you away.

I’m sorry, I wasn’t good enough
I did everything that I could
I’m sorry you said goodbye to me
I now feel so misunderstood.

I’m Sorry!!!




Copyright © Joker17 ... [ 2002-12-01 19:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 07:04:06 PM AEST
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Wow this is so deep..
brought tears to my eyes....
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 09:03:26 PM AEST
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Joker, this was so sad, but well written. Your pain and remorse are well depicted...
Welcome to ypdc.
Jenni


Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by LivingDeath on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 12:20:45 AM AEST
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oh yes.... it hurts,,,and it hurts a lot...
can't tell you what yo do or what to think...
cause i'm at the exact same situation...
but worst....i was the one that told her to leave...and later found that without her...
i just couldn't live.... be strong
you write the same kind of poetry that i write...
(mainly LOST LOVE POETRY)
so if you nedd to talk to someone....
i'm here...
LIVING DEATH


Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 03:53:39 AM AEST
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This is sad! Just remember, everything happens for a reason, and it all makes you who you are in the end, and it happens exactly as it's meant to. I like the line "You were my light in darkness" coz that's something I commonly say about my best friend. So it sort of gave me a personal link to your poem. I like it a lot. Well written, and very emotional.

~ MoonlitAngel




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