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It seems to be her new bestfriend.
It will never leave her or betray her.
Somehow it always seems to take the pain away.
So why is she never happy?
Is she lost beyond recognition?
Her bestfriend visits to many times to remember.
Shes loosing herself in the bleeding sting.
Its to addicting to stop.
The feeling is to good to let go.
To many problems to loose grip now.
So she keeps cutting till her arms are covered in scars.
She just need one more reason to take the razor to her wrists.
It would be so easy to die right now.
But she keeps holding on because death without the people she loves wouldn't be worth having. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 13 [informant] => pyro_88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Addictions

Contributed by pyro_88 on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:13:27 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Shes taken a razor to her skin again.
It seems to be her new bestfriend.
It will never leave her or betray her.
Somehow it always seems to take the pain away.
So why is she never happy?
Is she lost beyond recognition?
Her bestfriend visits to many times to remember.
Shes loosing herself in the bleeding sting.
Its to addicting to stop.
The feeling is to good to let go.
To many problems to loose grip now.
So she keeps cutting till her arms are covered in scars.
She just need one more reason to take the razor to her wrists.
It would be so easy to die right now.
But she keeps holding on because death without the people she loves wouldn't be worth having.

Copyright © pyro_88 ... [ 2004-12-30 01:13:27]
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Re: Addictions (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:29:24 AM AEST
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hmmm yea like u said needs sumthin wish i knew what it was good write i read it 3 times

Re: Addictions (User Rating: 1 )
by blacksabbath026 on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:32:02 AM AEST
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good but not great

Re: Addictions (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:42:06 AM AEST
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Very sad-n-heart breaking but written well.
Great work.
huggs, faith, hope,
emy

Re: Addictions (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:36:08 AM AEST
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Ok my thought on this is that it needs an ending, the poem is good it just needs a good ending to perfect it. Keep writing and editing this it will come out naturally if you think realy hard for it. Hope to see the ending of such a good work.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: Addictions (User Rating: 1 )
by musicisluv7 on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:50:34 AM AEST
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very dark and sad, brings back memories.
gud write
much luv me xx

Re: Addictions (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty_cat on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:05:46 AM AEST
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The content of the poem was good, but the ending let you down a bit. keep writing.

cat xx

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