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[title] => ''the rain's hands''
[time] => 2004-12-30 00:13:23
[hometext] => just a memoir of my perfect guy, but i screwed up. for you..you know who you are.
[bodytext] => He grabs her hands, and he looks into her eyes with his big shining ones. He understands her pain; he wants to be with her. She belongs to someone else. She always has. His tall stature was very large next to hers. His bright eyes search hers and then, he looks at his hands; wrapped around hers. His hands so big and warm, and leading even after he is gone. She loves these hands, but little does she know these hands will be gone forever soon. He strokes her small hands and she blushes a little. He finally says after this long period of silence, “Not even the rain have such small hands.” She smirks at him, and he just smiles in a deep reassuring way. He has secrets. Such secrets that would make us mortals stop rigid in our tracks. His bright eyes hide these sad secrets, and he hides them until he’s gone. This is not for long. But for right now, he strokes her hands and smiles at her as she loses herself in his eyes. He longs to kiss her, but restrains himself. For now, they just smile; looking at each other; felt lost in time.
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''the rain's hands''
Contributed by
english-pea-pelter
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Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:13:23 AM in AEST
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He grabs her hands, and he looks into her eyes with his big shining ones. He understands her pain; he wants to be with her. She belongs to someone else. She always has. His tall stature was very large next to hers. His bright eyes search hers and then, he looks at his hands; wrapped around hers. His hands so big and warm, and leading even after he is gone. She loves these hands, but little does she know these hands will be gone forever soon. He strokes her small hands and she blushes a little. He finally says after this long period of silence, “Not even the rain have such small hands.” She smirks at him, and he just smiles in a deep reassuring way. He has secrets. Such secrets that would make us mortals stop rigid in our tracks. His bright eyes hide these sad secrets, and he hides them until he’s gone. This is not for long. But for right now, he strokes her hands and smiles at her as she loses herself in his eyes. He longs to kiss her, but restrains himself. For now, they just smile; looking at each other; felt lost in time.
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Re: ''the rain's hands''
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by Dri on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:37:13 PM AEST
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*sigh*
i am content. this one really touched me.... i noticed you are pretty new here, welcome, i hope you enjoy YPDC! |
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Re: ''the rain's hands''
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 06:03:47 AM AEST
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| Oh...beautiful. Just beautiful... |
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Re: ''the rain's hands''
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by lil_noel09 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 04:21:31 PM AEST
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| hey guess who? its me emma...wow! i cant believe you wrote ALL that off of just what i told you...amazing! Thank You SOOOO much! You helped me remember the past really well. |
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