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Array ( [sid] => 77715 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Dont Know Where;I Dont Know Why... [time] => 2004-12-30 00:05:28 [hometext] => Please Comment [bodytext] => I got up one day and just started running
Dont know where;Dont know why...
I watched as everything and everyone around me just passed by
Don know where;Dont know why...
It struck me as odd when I saw the life I was living wasnt going anywhere,
But the life I wish I had was passing by.
No one stoped;No one helped the out burst and the braks down i was and am going threw
No one smiles;No one congratulated my success...
Dont know where but I ran!
Dont know why but I kept running...
Running from the fake lies and hatered I had felt day in day out!
No one was there when I was cutting or when the darkness nearly stole my life...
So I ran form everyone and the life that was tearing me apart;peice by peice
Limb for limb just so people would thing I was happy.
But No more;No more lies,No more hideing anymore...
I'll run...
Dont know where;Dont know why.... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 48 [informant] => BabyFacedAngel2010 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
I Dont Know Where;I Dont Know Why...

Contributed by BabyFacedAngel2010 on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:05:28 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I got up one day and just started running
Dont know where;Dont know why...
I watched as everything and everyone around me just passed by
Don know where;Dont know why...
It struck me as odd when I saw the life I was living wasnt going anywhere,
But the life I wish I had was passing by.
No one stoped;No one helped the out burst and the braks down i was and am going threw
No one smiles;No one congratulated my success...
Dont know where but I ran!
Dont know why but I kept running...
Running from the fake lies and hatered I had felt day in day out!
No one was there when I was cutting or when the darkness nearly stole my life...
So I ran form everyone and the life that was tearing me apart;peice by peice
Limb for limb just so people would thing I was happy.
But No more;No more lies,No more hideing anymore...
I'll run...
Dont know where;Dont know why....




Copyright © BabyFacedAngel2010 ... [ 2004-12-30 00:05:28]
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Re: I Dont Know Where;I Dont Know Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:40:52 AM AEST
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you cant run away from everything. it only matters if you care about yourself, everyone else only matters if you let them matter. i prefer to let most not matter, because i wont know them in a few years anyway, so why care about them and what they think?


Re: I Dont Know Where;I Dont Know Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:00:29 AM AEST
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Very sad but a masepeice as we all run sometimes.
Great writer u r.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: I Dont Know Where;I Dont Know Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:50:58 AM AEST
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very sad, but very good


Re: I Dont Know Where;I Dont Know Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:52:59 AM AEST
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Hmm i know what you mean by this, i've done it in the past and i didnt get me any where. Good poem tho.

Hugs,
Jane x


Re: I Dont Know Where;I Dont Know Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty_cat on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:31:30 AM AEST
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I like the confusion you protrayed in this piece. 'Don't know where; don't know why' - I love those lines.


Re: I Dont Know Where;I Dont Know Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:38:36 PM AEST
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How can a baby face angel write something so sad?




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