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Array ( [sid] => 77710 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2004-12-29 23:46:10 [hometext] => I wrote this when I was upset about all the wrongs and regrets in my love life [bodytext] => All these feelings, bottled up inside
Start to leak out trough a crack
Just a trickle
Then the whole bottle breaks
Leaving me bloody and torn inside
Raw and bleeding, my scars are ripped fresh
I hurt, I cry, I sigh
I die inside
Sorry for all that had to have happened
Needing, Longing for a second chance
To start anew, make all these scars cease to exist
To push these feelings back into non-existence
Fix this bady beaten heart of mine
Put together the pieces of yours
A smile and a kiss to make it right again
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 2 [informant] => __happyhurt__ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

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Contributed by __happyhurt__ on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:46:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

All these feelings, bottled up inside
Start to leak out trough a crack
Just a trickle
Then the whole bottle breaks
Leaving me bloody and torn inside
Raw and bleeding, my scars are ripped fresh
I hurt, I cry, I sigh
I die inside
Sorry for all that had to have happened
Needing, Longing for a second chance
To start anew, make all these scars cease to exist
To push these feelings back into non-existence
Fix this bady beaten heart of mine
Put together the pieces of yours
A smile and a kiss to make it right again

Copyright © __happyhurt__ ... [ 2004-12-29 23:46:10]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by thelmaandlouise72 on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:51:21 PM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE A TOREN SOUL, I HAVE FELT THAT WAY AS WELL

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:57:31 AM AEST
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i have felt that way too

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:53:11 AM AEST
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Nicely done, written very well. Could have used a rythem to it but the message is brilliant.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty_cat on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:58:13 AM AEST
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I liked this a lot. Well done

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:05:50 PM AEST
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I liked the thought..bottled up and slowly leaking out till the final rupture..very good.

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