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Array ( [sid] => 77680 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Red [time] => 2004-12-29 19:51:55 [hometext] => tell me what u think [bodytext] => Red
It’s the color of love
The color or pain
The color of her hair
It’s the color of anger
It’s my favorite color
Red
It’s a beautiful rose
The color of the pain I feel
The color of the ribbon in her hair
It’s the color of my face when she walks away
It’s my blood dripping to the ground
Red
It’s what’s in our heart’s
The color I see when my head’s bashed in
The color of her hair spreading across my face
It’s the color of our hand’s after a huge fight
It’s the blood splattered on the walls
Red
It’s the color of our love for each other
The color of our hearts tearing apart
The color of what’s left of your hair
It’s the color stained in my clothes
It’s the color of her blood drying on my face
Red
It’s all that’s left here for you to see [comments] => 6 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 13 [informant] => stonedraider23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Red

Contributed by stonedraider23 on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:51:55 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Red
It’s the color of love
The color or pain
The color of her hair
It’s the color of anger
It’s my favorite color
Red
It’s a beautiful rose
The color of the pain I feel
The color of the ribbon in her hair
It’s the color of my face when she walks away
It’s my blood dripping to the ground
Red
It’s what’s in our heart’s
The color I see when my head’s bashed in
The color of her hair spreading across my face
It’s the color of our hand’s after a huge fight
It’s the blood splattered on the walls
Red
It’s the color of our love for each other
The color of our hearts tearing apart
The color of what’s left of your hair
It’s the color stained in my clothes
It’s the color of her blood drying on my face
Red
It’s all that’s left here for you to see

Copyright Â© stonedraider23 ... [ 2004-12-29 19:51:55]
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Re: Red (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:02:10 PM AEST
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Red.
Well... I think of the blind guy that lives down the road.... LOL
Anyway... u've written a great lil poem here... filled with alot of emotion and raw images... The reader can definitely visualize this in the mind's eye... keep up the good work!
~Donna~

Re: Red (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:43:17 PM AEST
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awesome write willie,its full of confused emotions,loved it,and i love u even more

Re: Red (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:34:53 PM AEST
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powerful poem. though some words need to be less used.

Re: Red (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:34:54 PM AEST
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to be perfectly honest willie i dont know what to think,its very interesting and heartfelt and well i think it freaken rocks man.keep up the great job!!

cheech

Re: Red (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:13:19 PM AEST
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awesome. powerful is a good word for this. red is my favourite colour too, lol.

Re: Red (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty_cat on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:27:57 AM AEST
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great poem, although I think you used some words and descriptions too much

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