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[aid] => mick
[title] => Warning: Flinstone Vitamins may be habit forming
[time] => 2004-12-29 19:05:56
[hometext] => addiction, temptation, willpower? A shortie.
[bodytext] => Once again addicted to the charm
of inducing stomach lining harm
take one in the morining, and two at night
but rules are made to be broken, right?
they are like the Flinstone Vitamins we had as a kid
mommy said to take one, but no one ever did!
I liked the purple ones the best
but no matter the color I enjoyed the rest
so now again I am like a child
with my temtation running wild
but there is no mommy here to fret
and hide my bottle high up in a cabinet
so I take my pills as I please
knowing my addiction is a child born disease
[comments] => 10
[counter] => 213
[topic] => 66
[informant] => Rxqueen
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[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
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[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => drugabuse
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Warning: Flinstone Vitamins may be habit forming
Contributed by
Rxqueen
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:05:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Once again addicted to the charm
of inducing stomach lining harm
take one in the morining, and two at night
but rules are made to be broken, right?
they are like the Flinstone Vitamins we had as a kid
mommy said to take one, but no one ever did!
I liked the purple ones the best
but no matter the color I enjoyed the rest
so now again I am like a child
with my temtation running wild
but there is no mommy here to fret
and hide my bottle high up in a cabinet
so I take my pills as I please
knowing my addiction is a child born disease
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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2004-12-29 19:05:56]
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Re: Warning: Flinstone Vitamins may be habit forming
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by Kitty_cat on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:08:52 PM AEST
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| I liked this. a lot. |
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Re: Warning: Flinstone Vitamins may be habit forming
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by killingmehslowly on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:00:51 PM AEST
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| i agree, i love the title. Eyecatching and amusing. The poem itself is also awesome. i like it alot. |
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Re: Warning: Flinstone Vitamins may be habit forming
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:04:05 PM AEST
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Im sorry....I started to laugh when I saw the title and havent stopped yet. I hope I am not offending but this is priceless, ( pictures you trembling and reaching for Bam Bam)
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Warning: Flinstone Vitamins may be habit forming
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:29:27 PM AEST
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that explains your screen-name, ReXy...
I always liked DIno the best.
I can still taste it...
well written stuff.
--ghosty |
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Re: Warning: Flinstone Vitamins may be habit forming
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:02:26 PM AEST
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| ::sigh:: i used to take those. now i take vitaballs. lol. excellent write. well written. and of course original. |
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Re: Warning: Flinstone Vitamins may be habit forming
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:37:43 AM AEST
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Oh i remeber when i was i kid my mom make me take those, i love the orange the best i forgot who that was. Anyways i really liked this the Title of the peom is eye catching and you make us wait for a new poem from you so here we are enjoying it once again. Good write Jocelyn.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Warning: Flinstone Vitamins may be habit forming
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:22:23 AM AEST
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haha what a great, silly poem I too was
addicted to those Flintstone vitamins as a
child and I think my sister still is. Loved your
poem though thanks for the laugh!
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Warning: Flinstone Vitamins may be habit forming
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by pixie on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:48:03 AM AEST
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amazing write, you are very talented
pixie xx |
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Re: Warning: Flinstone Vitamins may be habit forming
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by Sweetheart on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 09:58:35 PM AEST
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| Wow! I just thought I was weird as a kid wanting to eat 3 or 4 of them. They were just like candy and I loved the red wilmas. Anyways this is a really cool poem...mann..i'm craving them right now. |
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Re: Warning: Flinstone Vitamins may be habit forming
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by lovesucks on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:14:40 AM AEST
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I can't believe you just wrote exactly what I said the other night about Flinstone Vitamins.........IT IS SOOOO TRUE had to eat the whole bottle, just because we were'nt supposed to. Little did I know what that meant than, I have been clean for the first time in a very many years I have 5months, it has been an amazing journey....LIFE
Thank you
Theresa |
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