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Array ( [sid] => 77639 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hello World [time] => 2004-12-29 12:55:17 [hometext] => This is one of those stupid poems you write in Geography when you're really bored after a test or something, that's where I wrote it, haha [bodytext] => Hello World
Hello world how are you today?
are the people still causing you pain with the stuff they put into you?

are they still causing polution without care or distress?
are they yelling at the top of their lungs and making you deph?

Hello world how are you today?
are your plants becoming extinct?
are your animals in danger?
are your seas turning into dark skies?
are your lungs collapsing?

Hello world,
Mabye tommorrow will be better. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Sk8ergrl_911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Hello World

Contributed by Sk8ergrl_911 on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:55:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Hello World
Hello world how are you today?
are the people still causing you pain with the stuff they put into you?

are they still causing polution without care or distress?
are they yelling at the top of their lungs and making you deph?

Hello world how are you today?
are your plants becoming extinct?
are your animals in danger?
are your seas turning into dark skies?
are your lungs collapsing?

Hello world,
Mabye tommorrow will be better.

Copyright © Sk8ergrl_911 ... [ 2004-12-29 12:55:17]
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Re: Hello World (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:50:04 PM AEST
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Well done, I like the way you did this.

Re: Hello World (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:07:20 PM AEST
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not bad and its not too stupid just out there good write

Re: Hello World (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:59:42 PM AEST
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good poem, and yes boredom is the greatest muse...

Re: Hello World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:03:20 PM AEST
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Great write...It's different and creative. :-)

Re: Hello World (User Rating: 1 )
by Sk8ergrl_911 on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:21:16 PM AEST
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Thank ya'll so much for telling me what ya thought! It means a lot to hear what others have to say!

Re: Hello World (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty_cat on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:20:12 PM AEST
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Poor world!!! I like the last stanza a lot :-)

cat xx

Re: Hello World (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:46:27 PM AEST
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i liked how you did this too. i dont think tomorrow will be better. it just seems to get worse.

Re: Hello World (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:13:46 PM AEST
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Nice.

Spazzo

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