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Array ( [sid] => 77625 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why didn't I [time] => 2004-12-29 11:11:50 [hometext] => if this poem seems weird it's because this is the first time I wrote something like this lemme no if u like it at all... thankz! [bodytext] => You stand there,
I watch..
Your dark figure walks across the room.
I feel like I always knew you.
Day after day it's like this,
I watch , you stand there....
And every day is the same nothing changes...
but today it's different you move,
and I feel my heart beat when I see you cross the room.
I stumble backwards afraid and not knowing what to do,
but then again I figure what is there to lose.
You grab my arm, but it's dark I never actualy saw your face.
The grip on my arm is rough...
The moon shines through the window of this broken place,
and i finally see your face....
Your eyes are green,
and sad....
I wonder why you seem so sad....
Your lips they seem to have a frown that just isnt there
to see, but for me it's clear.
I am afraid to love
but even this grip on my arm makes me feel like,
like I have known you for ever.
It doesnt hurt...
I just wonder how long,
how long did i stare into your eyes...
Gentle you kiss me,
and now I know I love you,
but still you seem sad,
and I know it's because you love me,
I was what you never had,
and i'm sorry but I am just afraid to love you....
you with all that i ever needed,
but now all my troubles seem to disapper as you kiss me,
and I now I'm not afraid to be with you.
I just wonder why didnt I think to cross this room first? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 43 [informant] => StrwBrryStrBrst0225 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Why didn't I

Contributed by StrwBrryStrBrst0225 on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:11:50 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



You stand there,
I watch..
Your dark figure walks across the room.
I feel like I always knew you.
Day after day it's like this,
I watch , you stand there....
And every day is the same nothing changes...
but today it's different you move,
and I feel my heart beat when I see you cross the room.
I stumble backwards afraid and not knowing what to do,
but then again I figure what is there to lose.
You grab my arm, but it's dark I never actualy saw your face.
The grip on my arm is rough...
The moon shines through the window of this broken place,
and i finally see your face....
Your eyes are green,
and sad....
I wonder why you seem so sad....
Your lips they seem to have a frown that just isnt there
to see, but for me it's clear.
I am afraid to love
but even this grip on my arm makes me feel like,
like I have known you for ever.
It doesnt hurt...
I just wonder how long,
how long did i stare into your eyes...
Gentle you kiss me,
and now I know I love you,
but still you seem sad,
and I know it's because you love me,
I was what you never had,
and i'm sorry but I am just afraid to love you....
you with all that i ever needed,
but now all my troubles seem to disapper as you kiss me,
and I now I'm not afraid to be with you.
I just wonder why didnt I think to cross this room first?




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Re: Why didn't I (User Rating: 1 )
by Sk8ergrl_911 on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:06:54 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem, it's really good and it shows that you can have feelings abotu something!


Re: Why didn't I (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:51:58 AM AEST
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weird? nope. i loved this. =] keep writing more of it =]


Re: Why didn't I (User Rating: 1 )
by weezer21 on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:02:53 AM AEST
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wierd is far from what this poem is....keep writing




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