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Array ( [sid] => 77620 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Final Goodbye [time] => 2004-12-29 10:33:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I slit my wrist tonite thinking of you
and all the sh** you put me through
I just can't take the stress of life anymore it's just too much for me

It's finally getting to me
I'm such a dissapointment, a Failure
I don't know what my purpose is in this world

It's all your fault I turned out this way
All the thing you promised, all the lies you shared
You're nothing to me
I am nothing to No one

So,this is my final goodbye
I'm sure i'll see you soon
So long my friends
We'll meet again
Somewhere,Sometime soon
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 36 [informant] => rottenrioter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
My Final Goodbye

Contributed by rottenrioter on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:33:58 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I slit my wrist tonite thinking of you
and all the sh** you put me through
I just can't take the stress of life anymore it's just too much for me

It's finally getting to me
I'm such a dissapointment, a Failure
I don't know what my purpose is in this world

It's all your fault I turned out this way
All the thing you promised, all the lies you shared
You're nothing to me
I am nothing to No one

So,this is my final goodbye
I'm sure i'll see you soon
So long my friends
We'll meet again
Somewhere,Sometime soon




Copyright © rottenrioter ... [ 2004-12-29 10:33:58]
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Re: My Final Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:34:24 AM AEST
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sad and tragic, hope these are just words
pixie xx


Re: My Final Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:46:37 AM AEST
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It's finally getting to me
I'm such a dissapointment, a Failure
I don't know what my purpose is in this world


Brave soul to post this, full of sadness and tragedy. The above quoted stanza really hits home. Such feelings know such boundries like age, sex or creed.

peace
TS

P.S. With that user name of yours, I feel like calling you Johnny (Rotten) LOL!


Re: My Final Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:05:31 AM AEST
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wow. amazing and powerful poem. dont kill yourself over someone. they arent even worth the thought of it.


Re: My Final Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by willworkformilk on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 03:59:15 AM AEST
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I agree with everything the others how have posted said. I really hope these are just words too. It's really really not worth it.




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