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Seashells

Contributed by Crimsonflame on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:32:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I looked into your eyes and I see,
Our love represented by the sea,
Spreading wide and tempestous,
Yet as lovely as it can be.

Do you remember how we met?
Right here in this tranquil seashore,
Beneath the crying gulls,
Surrounded by the crashing waves.

You used to tell me,
When we were together,
All you hear is the wave at my feet,
And that I am all that you can see.

This is our lover's paradise,
This is where we sat and dreamt,
Entwined in each other's arms,
Cocooned in our promises.

Now I am here alone,
Our sandcastle ruins at my feet,
The seashells scattered across the sand,
Our hopes ruined,our love undone.

My heart broken in thousand pieces,
Scattered like our treasured seashells,
Swept by our waves of tears,
Until you come back to me,
There is where my heart pieces will be,
Circling the ruins of our sandcastle,
Where we built our dreams within.




Copyright © Crimsonflame ... [ 2004-12-29 02:32:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Seashells (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:36:08 AM AEST
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great poem, sad


Re: Seashells (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:08:05 AM AEST
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Jus simply beautifull even tho it's sad.
smiles,huggs,
emy


Re: Seashells (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:29:14 AM AEST
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lost love lost its glove. read my poems on "THe sorrow that struck her" " What is your love?" etc they carry this same episode. nice write but sad to hear.
i wish your love should blossom again. read my poem on The power of your eye-sight in contrast to the above poem
girish


Re: Seashells (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 06:48:14 AM AEST
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sad, beautiful and well written, filled with emotions, a great write
pixie xx


Re: Seashells (User Rating: 1 )
by prozac_memory on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:21:40 AM AEST
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this is a lovely emotional poem.
.x.


Re: Seashells (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 06:51:30 AM AEST
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First attempt at love poetry? It does not suck, this was awsome! I love the sea...
Well done. This poem was beautiful.
Take care.
David




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