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*ComE bAcK tO Me*

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:26:42 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



Come back to me,
the sky is grey,
my heart is bleeding for you,
and im stuck in disarray.
The bitterness
of the night,
makes me choke inside,
as i see your soul take flight.
im helpless,
just watching you fly away,
take me with you,
stop my sky from being grey.
i would take you back,
forgive your ways,
holding you forever,
as out song of love plays.
i want you to know,
i treasure you,
that smile and the way you walk,
everything you do.
i never got the chance,
to prove my love was true,
so believe me now,
when i say i love you,
to have one more
night with you,
is my fondest prayer to God,
your kiss made new.
it saddens me to know,
you bid her farewell,
she receives your kiss,
in your arms she dwells.
"Goodbye" i say
even though you cant hear,
you've gone away,
no reply is what i fear.




Copyright © pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2004-12-28 23:26:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me* (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:30:23 PM AEST
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Amazing. I love the flow.
Great job.


Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me* (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:35:53 PM AEST
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Awesomely beautifull masterpeice.
smiles,
emy


Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me* (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:15:06 AM AEST
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wow... amazing poetry


Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me* (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 04:30:54 PM AEST
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cool poem
i love the way you portrayed the emotions


Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me* (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:26:00 PM AEST
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Great poem... really liked it... and... as u know from my poem... i can totally relate...
again... great write...

Jishes


Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me* (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 12:00:22 AM AEST
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I love your poem, i can relate to it


Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me* (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:29:39 PM AEST
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I felt every word..
what an awesome write Rach..
I love the flow in this best!
a most amazing poetress you are-

5 stars on this.. ; )
I loved it!

B




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