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Mistake
Contributed by
O7NeVeS
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:16:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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You say you’re being honest, and not playing any games
If this is all true, why do I worry about other dames
I want to believe you, believe that you’re true
But it’s so hard, when I’m so unsure about you
I know you have a past, as well as many exes
And I know you wonder about me, talking to both sexes
But I’ve been with you for a few weeks now
And all I can think about, is just one question – How?
My gut tells me to believe you, and do it whole heartedly
But my mind tells me –WARNING!- you may act cold heartedly
I will follow my heart, and not think otherwise
Because this is what prevents me, from talking to other guys
I say I’m in no rush, for what may come to be
But I just can’t wait, can’t wait to see
It’s hard to pace my feelings, especially when they’re racing
How do you feel, am I the only one that’s chasing?
This is what I was thinking, way before
I will never think that way, ever more
My gut was wrong, I should’ve been listening
But that’s entirely me, to dismiss my thinking
That’s just like you, you did what you could
I guess it’s all true, you’re just that good
Copyright ©
O7NeVeS
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2004-12-28 21:16:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mistake
(User Rating: 1 ) by blossomingcherry5353 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:24:46 PM AEST (User
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Wow!, that poem was written very well, and it was so emotional too. Hope everything goes well for you.
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Re: Mistake
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:33:35 PM AEST (User
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Great poem. Nice flow. |
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Re: Mistake
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dec2three198five on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 10:30:55 PM AEST (User
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I like the flow. poem is good. Keep writin. Henry33 |
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Re: Mistake
(User Rating: 1 ) by CurtisC on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 02:08:56 AM AEST (User
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i really liked the flow of this one, it just kept goin without a hitch..finally i poem with a happy ending :) wonderful work tanya!
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