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tell me
Contributed by
bebe20071
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:56:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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why don't you just tell me
and then everything will be alright as it should be
because i love you too
but if you keep on hiding and running away there will never be me and you
you always try to impress me
and then act like you never saw me
everything becomes so messed up
why would you just tell me and stand up
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Re: tell me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:47:08 PM AEST (User
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needs some different rhymes because rhyming the same word with the same word often is just tiring and shows lack of creativity.
just ask yourself. should you care about a person such as this? |
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