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Renovators Delight

Contributed by spike on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:05:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry







Modest rooms, solid floor
Just come and knock on any door
Low maintenance, foundations deep
Silent comfort to help you sleep
Warmth against cold winter’s chill
Cushions on the window sill
A perfect aspect for growing old
Privacy if you’re feeling bold
A stoop for your tired feet
A Feng Shui flow for Summer’s heat
Ambience and space to breathe
You’ll never ever want to leave
It’s clear it needs a little repair
But will respond to loving care
You’ll fall in love I guarantee
And yes, of course, the house is…….

Me.






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Re: Renovators Delight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:12:37 PM AEST
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Oh that's cute! My house is exotic, open and airy. With lots of fans. lol (Not sure what that means!)
Anyway, I *love* the metaphor!
Cheers!


Re: Renovators Delight (User Rating: 1 )
by LevyMetal on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:23:04 PM AEST
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very cute. You made the words flow so easily!


Re: Renovators Delight (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:32:14 PM AEST
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Different for you... I think.

The metaphor is interesting. Why is it that real estate agents always talk about the number of rooms, the hard wood floors, and all those foolish luxuries like swimming pools and jacuzzi tubs--- but forget all about the ambience? People often do a similar thing when meeting someone new... it's not so very different, I guess. And maybe... that's the point.

Wondering what sort of house I'd be,
SNM



Re: Renovators Delight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:20:26 AM AEST
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LoL...I love it! So creative! :-)




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