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Array ( [sid] => 77561 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~~Chose~~ [time] => 2004-12-28 19:07:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => why dont you like me now,
is it because im too fat to skinny, a blonde.
Is it because i wouldn't give everything up just to be with you!
Because you know some of my friends like you too!
Is it because, my hairs too short, because i have blue eyes. IS it because i may have a few pimples, or maybe because i have never gotten in trouble in school.
if thats the case then you are quite a fool!!

Just because i like you tons, doesn't mean you have to tell your friends my every move!!
youve asked my best friend out before,
then you changed your mind, and forgot bout her and moved on to sarah,
hello make up your mind moron,
then i realised your on{aim}.
you gotta make up your mind hunn, or else you'll end up lonely, by yourself,
where you could of had lauren or me,
in stead you chose the gurl that you doubted at first.
i know you claim you just wanna be friends,
well newsflash i dont, if your gonna be that way!!
you dont need to go around screwing up everyones dayz. your like every other guy on this earth, all you concern bout is your self!!!
you destroy friendships, you make everything complicated,
it seems like your barely educated!!
sweety you need to experience lust,
instead of putting everyone who feels for you away in the dust!!
I wish i'd never had to confront you bout this,
but hey your on my unforgetful list!!
you need to make up your mind,
you chose ....who do you wanna be with brianna or me,
if you chose her baby you gotta let me be.
Your making me cry,
im trying to dry my eyes, but you wont let me, you dont have a symphony,
you need to chose,
because if you dont , or if you do,
it doesnt matter,
because no matter what happens, in the end, .....you'll lose!! [comments] => 6 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 2 [informant] => poetrygirl1991 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
~~Chose~~

Contributed by poetrygirl1991 on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 07:07:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



why dont you like me now,
is it because im too fat to skinny, a blonde.
Is it because i wouldn't give everything up just to be with you!
Because you know some of my friends like you too!
Is it because, my hairs too short, because i have blue eyes. IS it because i may have a few pimples, or maybe because i have never gotten in trouble in school.
if thats the case then you are quite a fool!!

Just because i like you tons, doesn't mean you have to tell your friends my every move!!
youve asked my best friend out before,
then you changed your mind, and forgot bout her and moved on to sarah,
hello make up your mind moron,
then i realised your on{aim}.
you gotta make up your mind hunn, or else you'll end up lonely, by yourself,
where you could of had lauren or me,
in stead you chose the gurl that you doubted at first.
i know you claim you just wanna be friends,
well newsflash i dont, if your gonna be that way!!
you dont need to go around screwing up everyones dayz. your like every other guy on this earth, all you concern bout is your self!!!
you destroy friendships, you make everything complicated,
it seems like your barely educated!!
sweety you need to experience lust,
instead of putting everyone who feels for you away in the dust!!
I wish i'd never had to confront you bout this,
but hey your on my unforgetful list!!
you need to make up your mind,
you chose ....who do you wanna be with brianna or me,
if you chose her baby you gotta let me be.
Your making me cry,
im trying to dry my eyes, but you wont let me, you dont have a symphony,
you need to chose,
because if you dont , or if you do,
it doesnt matter,
because no matter what happens, in the end, .....you'll lose!!




Copyright © poetrygirl1991 ... [ 2004-12-28 19:07:05]
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Re: ~~Chose~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by punkhead13 on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 07:17:16 PM AEST
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Wow, this happened to me before. it's freaky. I can totally relate to it.


Re: ~~Chose~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 07:27:18 PM AEST
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yeah this happened to me too. cept, i never actually go out with any girls, i just sit there and think about askin, and then never ask any. mayb im diffrent to him, but its not too great when u cant choose either. dont wanna make a move unless u mess sumin up, or hurt some1. but, alas, i figure he is probably diffrent to me


Re: ~~Chose~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 07:35:20 PM AEST
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good write i had this problem before now im just a loner hope he picks u or whateva


Re: ~~Chose~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:02:19 PM AEST
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Unfortunately it takes an awfully long time to learn that we can't own people. Though you have written well on what it feels like to be the one not chosen because of whatever it is you don't have that they'd rather have. Cheers!


Re: ~~Chose~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by forgottenone_iam on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:47:36 PM AEST
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Hey i really liked this one good way of putting your feelings out there its good to tell the guy what your feeling keep writing hun! KIMMIE


Re: ~~Chose~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by blossomingcherry5353 on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:16:46 PM AEST
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That's sad, but It also happened to me member that boy I told you about, he kinda led me on while still being with his girlfriend, and he didn't want me at all, I got confused by him flirting with me. I feel for you. This was a great poem, it showed a lot of emotion, keep up your bueatiful poetry.

shannon




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